The Devil Fights Back
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "The Devil Fights Back - Ch. 13"Challenges in the pharmaceutical field
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I love that Fran is still working to protect her brother after all these years. And the work with Dana, whom we once reviled, is working with Fran now to clear Brian.
The plot thickens:-)
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I love that Fran is still working to protect her brother after all these years. And the work with Dana, whom we once reviled, is working with Fran now to clear Brian.
The plot thickens:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Yeah, it's like I just added a bit of cornstarch. It will get pretty thick after a while :-)
We've yet to see how Marie will figure into things, but I assure you she will.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jim,
What a great chapter of your book. It appears things are moving along nicely for Fran and Dana. Isn't ironic that they met over drinks and now they are working together. Should I call this a coincidence or what?
Great job my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Jim,
What a great chapter of your book. It appears things are moving along nicely for Fran and Dana. Isn't ironic that they met over drinks and now they are working together. Should I call this a coincidence or what?
Great job my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much, Cecilia. I guess it is sort of coincidental that Dana works for Big Pharma and Fran's brother happens to be waging a war against Big Pharma, but it sure will be great to have an insider who can tell them what's going on so they can prepare for it.
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Jim,
You're welcome my friend.
Cecilia
Comment from royowen
So Dana has already worked out that Leonard Merra is a dick, but talks with Fran, and Fran realises that Dana is on their side and interested in helping her overcome this crooked plan to destroy Brian's good work, beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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So Dana has already worked out that Leonard Merra is a dick, but talks with Fran, and Fran realises that Dana is on their side and interested in helping her overcome this crooked plan to destroy Brian's good work, beautifully written Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Dana has finally gotten fed up by her company's shenanigans and has decided to turn over a new leaf. This should add a little excitement to her life! I think that's mainly why she's doing it.
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That's so good
Comment from BethShelby
This is good that Brian will know what he is dealing with and make plans.
Dana is going get her company in trouble for spreading false rumors, I wonder what she will representatives under to say.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This is good that Brian will know what he is dealing with and make plans.
Dana is going get her company in trouble for spreading false rumors, I wonder what she will representatives under to say.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Good question. I think she'll kind of have to go along with it for now, lest her boss questions her reps to make sure she's spreading the word to them.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The plot thickens. I can't wait to see how all of this is going to play out. I know you have a handle on all of this. This is a good story and this is a good write. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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The plot thickens. I can't wait to see how all of this is going to play out. I know you have a handle on all of this. This is a good story and this is a good write. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Yeah, this is just the beginning of Big Pharma's tactics. They'll get a lot worse before the end. I'm so glad you're enjoying it, Barbara. Thanks for your kind words.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Who can turn down peach pie and vanilla ice cream? Certainly not me. And all for a little information. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Who can turn down peach pie and vanilla ice cream? Certainly not me. And all for a little information. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Ric. Yeah, that happens to be my favorite dessert. That and peach cobbler too. Glad you're enjoying the story.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
And the plot progresses.
"... Here are my credentials, too so we can begin to talk to each other." - I would place a comma after 'too', as well as before.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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And the plot progresses.
"... Here are my credentials, too so we can begin to talk to each other." - I would place a comma after 'too', as well as before.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Wayne. Now we see the strength of Dana's feelings about her job and the commitment she's willing to make to do some good in her life for a change.
Good edit too. Thanks!