Our First Kiss
3-6-9 poem for contest21 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Katiemae,
Like me, you're in a romantic mood. I meet my husband-to-be when I was 12; so I can relate to this one. Just precious in the unique form.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the 3-6-9 poetry contest.
Sal Xoxo's
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Dear Katiemae,
Like me, you're in a romantic mood. I meet my husband-to-be when I was 12; so I can relate to this one. Just precious in the unique form.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the 3-6-9 poetry contest.
Sal Xoxo's
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Katiemae.
First let me say, your poem meets the style standard to a T. More so, the message is an innocent and endearing one. Every reader can fix his or her eyes upon this poem and smile. The last line of the last stanza is a great one.
Robert
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Hello Katiemae.
First let me say, your poem meets the style standard to a T. More so, the message is an innocent and endearing one. Every reader can fix his or her eyes upon this poem and smile. The last line of the last stanza is a great one.
Robert
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was so cute. The picture is a good choice for the poem. I like the last line. It brings back.memories of my own first kiss. Good luck in the contest.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It was so cute. The picture is a good choice for the poem. I like the last line. It brings back.memories of my own first kiss. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is so cute and matches so well with the picture above it.
I love the way you capture that moment in time, the perfect first, that can never be repeated.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
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This is so cute and matches so well with the picture above it.
I love the way you capture that moment in time, the perfect first, that can never be repeated.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
I just love that last line!! A beautiful, heartfelt poem, with great use of the form's constraints. I find this particular form to be a bit difficult, but this was great.
Thank you for sharing!
Xo
Jess
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I just love that last line!! A beautiful, heartfelt poem, with great use of the form's constraints. I find this particular form to be a bit difficult, but this was great.
Thank you for sharing!
Xo
Jess
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Jacob1395
I could really feel the love in this piece and the spark of energy between these two people. I thought you captured this really well in your writing. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
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I could really feel the love in this piece and the spark of energy between these two people. I thought you captured this really well in your writing. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Natureschild
This is a beautiful short poem, delivered in so few syllables. A perfect moment when a spark of energy makes the planets align for someone and everything seems perfect.
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This is a beautiful short poem, delivered in so few syllables. A perfect moment when a spark of energy makes the planets align for someone and everything seems perfect.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Begin Again
When you know...you know! There's that special spark that makes the moment electrified and so much different from any others. Short and to the point! We'll be done! Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
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When you know...you know! There's that special spark that makes the moment electrified and so much different from any others. Short and to the point! We'll be done! Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
I love this. It's such a sweet little poem and the image makes it even cuter! A perfect entry for the 3-6-9 prompt good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
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I love this. It's such a sweet little poem and the image makes it even cuter! A perfect entry for the 3-6-9 prompt good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem is well written and meets the 3-6-9 poem contest rules. I love the creativity in the poem, especially the imagery in the last line. I could imagine the feeling and scene of your first kiss. Smiles! Well done, and good luck in the contest.
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Your poem is well written and meets the 3-6-9 poem contest rules. I love the creativity in the poem, especially the imagery in the last line. I could imagine the feeling and scene of your first kiss. Smiles! Well done, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024