Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Miracles - Chap 3"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from LJbutterfly
There is never a dull moment with you. Lol. Every thought, reflection, and memory carries some type of action. There is no way to guess what happens next, or what connections Doyle has with the outside world. The longer he is in jail, the more vicious he will become. As long as he has money to pay, there will be people willing to do his bidding. Eleanor, you need all your strength and wit. No one can be trusted.
I'm hooked and waiting to see how you twist and turn this story. It was well worth waiting for.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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There is never a dull moment with you. Lol. Every thought, reflection, and memory carries some type of action. There is no way to guess what happens next, or what connections Doyle has with the outside world. The longer he is in jail, the more vicious he will become. As long as he has money to pay, there will be people willing to do his bidding. Eleanor, you need all your strength and wit. No one can be trusted.
I'm hooked and waiting to see how you twist and turn this story. It was well worth waiting for.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Oh this is going to have your head spinning, I think. Something different around every corner and it affects our favorite people. I hope I can pull this off.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do like this story. You're doing a great job with it.
Her voice broke, her words nearly a whisper but fierce. "Every time I close my eyes, (fierce, this one is tricky but because she speaking, I'm saying a comma)
She smirked, "Think about it, John." (smirked.)
"But how can you be sure the Judge is behind it?" (because of 'the' it would be 'judge')
Eleanor smiled, "One never knows what's just around the corner." (smiled.)
Phillip Henderson isn't good coming into Rebecca's and Jenna's life.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I do like this story. You're doing a great job with it.
Her voice broke, her words nearly a whisper but fierce. "Every time I close my eyes, (fierce, this one is tricky but because she speaking, I'm saying a comma)
She smirked, "Think about it, John." (smirked.)
"But how can you be sure the Judge is behind it?" (because of 'the' it would be 'judge')
Eleanor smiled, "One never knows what's just around the corner." (smiled.)
Phillip Henderson isn't good coming into Rebecca's and Jenna's life.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Phillip Henderson is going to rock Rebecca's world and maybe a few other people too. No one will expect that this is coming. but that's not happening just yet.
Thanks again, Barbara.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
It's fantastic, of course, i just can't get enough, it's like an addiction at least there are no hazardous side effects, lol but I think if it were me I would have poisoned his steak just for the fun of it or maybe just put lots of a laxative pounded into it, that could be amusing. I'm really not evil!!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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It's fantastic, of course, i just can't get enough, it's like an addiction at least there are no hazardous side effects, lol but I think if it were me I would have poisoned his steak just for the fun of it or maybe just put lots of a laxative pounded into it, that could be amusing. I'm really not evil!!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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You have me laughing hysterically Marilyn... I could imagine me overloading the steak with a laxative, but I have to make sure they don't frown on Eleanor...besides I'd run out of time and space for the remainder of the book. LOl Thank you so much for the review and the laugh.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another superb chapter of you book. I believe you are correct in saying this book is going to be a wild ride. You are the author, so you would know (ha,ha). I'm setting. on the edge of my seat with bated breath to see what's coming next.
Awesome job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Another superb chapter of you book. I believe you are correct in saying this book is going to be a wild ride. You are the author, so you would know (ha,ha). I'm setting. on the edge of my seat with bated breath to see what's coming next.
Awesome job
Cecilia
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Oh and there is so much more! I am thrilled that as a fairly new reader to my stories you are spellbound and eager for more. I couldn't be happier to know that. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
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you are welcome sunshine :)
Comment from Jacob1395
I'm sure Eleanor will do whatever she can to get justice for her sister, that scene between her and John in his cell was really intense. I'm not sure if she is putting her family in more danger though by doing that. Another excellent chapter, Carol. I really enjoyed reading it.
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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I'm sure Eleanor will do whatever she can to get justice for her sister, that scene between her and John in his cell was really intense. I'm not sure if she is putting her family in more danger though by doing that. Another excellent chapter, Carol. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Eleanor will soon learn just how dangerous and powerful Doyle is and he's going to be laughing from his cell...at least for now. Thanks for the review, Jacob.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think Jenna has a lot to worry about, and really needs to confide in Eleanor. She might be a ghost, but my goodness she can do some pretty impressive stuff. That Doyle (Boyle -as in - boil would have been a good name for him, you can pierce them and watch the disgusting slime come out of them) At least I don't have to wait for long to read the next part. I love Eleanor, I just wish Margaret hadn't been murdered. Great chapter, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I think Jenna has a lot to worry about, and really needs to confide in Eleanor. She might be a ghost, but my goodness she can do some pretty impressive stuff. That Doyle (Boyle -as in - boil would have been a good name for him, you can pierce them and watch the disgusting slime come out of them) At least I don't have to wait for long to read the next part. I love Eleanor, I just wish Margaret hadn't been murdered. Great chapter, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Soo, Jenna is going to be overwhelmed and Eleanor is going to have things coming at her in far too many directions while Doyle sits back and laughs. I need to be able to read faster so I can post... the writing isn't the problem...it's getting the money. LOL Just like life!
Smiles, Carol
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I don't know how you can keep up with the amount you write and post! Do you ever go to bed???? 😂🥰xx
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Not very long...I forgot the clocks turned back today so I was up even earlier this morning. It was 2:00 a.m. when I realized it...but I was awake so I started to read to get enough to post. I could post several a day if I had the money. Glad you are patient with me, because I am not!
Smiles, Carol
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We turned out clocks back the previous weekend. The 27th October. I guess every country does things their own way. If I can't wait one day, how the heck do I expect anyone to wait a week? LOL xxxx
Comment from Tim Margetts
You have captured me, so colour me intrigued and really enjoying the sound of this.
When I get a moment (LOL That's my little joke right there.) I shall go and look up the story from Ch 1
Tim
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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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You have captured me, so colour me intrigued and really enjoying the sound of this.
When I get a moment (LOL That's my little joke right there.) I shall go and look up the story from Ch 1
Tim
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Please do, Tim. I will be so honored that you would take the time to start from the beginning and the best part is...there's still money to turn on each chapter. I thank you so much for enjoying my story and be assured the wild ride is just beginning.
Smiles, Carol