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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from royowen
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I didn't expect this, but then again it was a fanstory, and I've been been here for some years, and we've never had one before, and we've never had one in this venue before. Somehow I don't thing we will again! Heh heh, well done Jessica, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Lol thank you, Roy! Xo
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Lol thank you, Roy! Xo
reply by royowen on 02-Nov-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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That's sweet! Jim's getting great recognition in these tales of the infamous Fanstory convention. I'm glad you know the area well enough to drive even with chickens as obstacles!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    lol thanks, Helen!
Comment from gansach
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This is so much fun reading all these versions of the crazy convention antics. I am really enjoying it. I thought I was the Queen of Lateness, but your delays are so much more interesting. And your descriptions of the chaos are great. Such a fun project! Well done!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Lol thank you so much!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Another fun account of such an exciting scene through the eyes of another participant... almost ready to participate in the food fight at this point! ;) Thanx for sharing you! ;)

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Some excellent images here, Jess, which will stick in my memory. In particular the colours of the fruit truck spill reflected in the windows and your elegant self walking in trying to channel your "I totally meant to arrive now" vice:)) Things clearly deteriorated from bad to worse then (I always say when the day starts badly it ain't gonna get any better!) That Jane Babies deserves to be whipped. How dare she injure Jim - he's my best friend too:)) A thoroughly entertaining read. Thanks Jess. Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing your version of what happened during this food fight. I have enjoyed reading every version. They're all great. I totally enjoyed Gretchen and Rachelle's story. I hope they collaborate again.

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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Barbara!
Comment from Jim Wile
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Awww. You stuck up for me. Thanks, Bestie!

I loved hearing about the troubles you often encounter making you late. Chickens in the driveway, huh? That's a good one. I also loved your interpretation of what you were seeing as you made your entrance--some sort of performance art, when the truth of it was just a bunch of adults acting like children.

This has been a fun romp with many funny chapters being added to this wonderful story.

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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
    Hahah for my best friend? If course!!!
    Xo