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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my goodness, this is hilarious! I had so much fun reading. Thank you for sharing this very creative addition with us. I couldn't help but enjoy reading. I keep trying but nothing comes to mind to add to this. My muse must have went with the strippers.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Oh my goodness, this is hilarious! I had so much fun reading. Thank you for sharing this very creative addition with us. I couldn't help but enjoy reading. I keep trying but nothing comes to mind to add to this. My muse must have went with the strippers.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Did you like doing the cha-cha-cha? Thanks for enjoying the story. It was fun to write and imagine all the crazy antics. I wish I had added more friends, but I wasn't sure how long it could be.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, Carol, that was a lovely input to the story. You certainly me ade it into a party.
I'm actually going to add a chapter myself. I just can't resist it.
All the best of luck. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Hahaha, Carol, that was a lovely input to the story. You certainly me ade it into a party.
I'm actually going to add a chapter myself. I just can't resist it.
All the best of luck. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I had a lot of dun writing this and wished I had added more of our friends, but I didn't know how long it could be. I've glad that you enjoyed it and i am looking forward to seeing what you write. Thanks for being so generous with your stars.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
I absolutely love this. It was a very, very funny thing that you have written, and you have quite an imagination. I wish I could write something that clever, but I'm just not in the mood to do much writing of late. I wish you the very best and I'm glad everyone had a delightful time at the party. Patricia.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I absolutely love this. It was a very, very funny thing that you have written, and you have quite an imagination. I wish I could write something that clever, but I'm just not in the mood to do much writing of late. I wish you the very best and I'm glad everyone had a delightful time at the party. Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you as always, Patricia. I am thrilled that you enjoyed my version of the party. Keep your chin up and write your peoms...they are always beautiful.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jim Wile
Too funny, Carol! What a great and clever surprise to have the cops turn out to be strippers. What promised to be a tense situation resolves into hilarity, as everyone gets in on the fun. Even Jane in her offbeat, kinky way. Marvelous job with this!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Too funny, Carol! What a great and clever surprise to have the cops turn out to be strippers. What promised to be a tense situation resolves into hilarity, as everyone gets in on the fun. Even Jane in her offbeat, kinky way. Marvelous job with this!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, Jim. I am thrilled that you enjoyed my little escapade with the strippers. It definitely was a party! Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Teri7
Sounds like every one had a great time. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery with the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings,teri
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Sounds like every one had a great time. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery with the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings,teri
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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A wild party but at least it was fake and no one was hurt. LOl Thanks for the review, Teri.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Such a fun chapter! Great twist, having the police actually being strippers. Sounds like a wild party. I can picture you in the red dress, starting up the party again. Sounds like Jane is having a good time, too. At least she's out of Rachelle's and Gretchen's hair. Hahaha. Carol
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Such a fun chapter! Great twist, having the police actually being strippers. Sounds like a wild party. I can picture you in the red dress, starting up the party again. Sounds like Jane is having a good time, too. At least she's out of Rachelle's and Gretchen's hair. Hahaha. Carol
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Yes, I thought getting rid of Jane would earn me several "brownie points" with Rachelle and Gretchen if nothing else did. It was a fun story to imagine. Thanks so much for enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
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My pleasure.
Comment from Jacob1395
This made me laugh, Carol. I was cringing a little bit as I was reading but I bet you had fun writing it. I can just imagine the look on everyone's faces as the officer's started to strip. An excellent piece, Carol. I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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This made me laugh, Carol. I was cringing a little bit as I was reading but I bet you had fun writing it. I can just imagine the look on everyone's faces as the officer's started to strip. An excellent piece, Carol. I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I guess I let the imagination of a "Long-ago event planner" get out of hand but I think everyone was having fun and how do you top that for next year's bash? Thanks so much for the review and thoughts, Jacob.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was just so hilariously funny! That would be a party I'd love to go to, but secretly!!! LOL I'll be under the table with Gretchen until I'd drunk a whole bottle of bubbly! This was amazing, Carol, your imagination is just unstoppable, and thank the Lord for that!! Loved it, my clever friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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That was just so hilariously funny! That would be a party I'd love to go to, but secretly!!! LOL I'll be under the table with Gretchen until I'd drunk a whole bottle of bubbly! This was amazing, Carol, your imagination is just unstoppable, and thank the Lord for that!! Loved it, my clever friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I sometimes surprise myself, Sandra. The minute I received an invitation from Gretchen to write, I didn't have to think much. For some reason, this "once long-ago event planner" just knew those cops were strippers. Or maybe "secretly" I hoped. LOL I too would be under the table and passed out if I drank a bottle of champagne...either that or dancing on the table (which don't tell anyone) but I've done that a time or two. LOl Oh, memories! Thanks for enjoying and for always cheering me on. I do so love you!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was hysterical and I can proudly say not at all what I was expecting. The thought of police strippers is too funny for words. If word gets out about this turn of events, i will never be able to go to another convention. Lol. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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This was hysterical and I can proudly say not at all what I was expecting. The thought of police strippers is too funny for words. If word gets out about this turn of events, i will never be able to go to another convention. Lol. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Oh, I beg to differ. I think you and Rachelle will be the stars of every party...convention or not... from her on out. Come on! Champagne, whipping cream, strippers...what more could you ask for? Well, maybe money and more stars...LOL I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from gansach
Well, this is an interesting turn of events-LOL! This wild and crazy group sounds like it really knows how to throw a party. What a vivid and fun chapter you have added to the get-to-know-you pre-party party. Great job, Carol! I love it!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Well, this is an interesting turn of events-LOL! This wild and crazy group sounds like it really knows how to throw a party. What a vivid and fun chapter you have added to the get-to-know-you pre-party party. Great job, Carol! I love it!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much! I wasn't sure it was exactly what Rachelle and Gretchen were looking for, but as a "once upon a time event planner" it's where my party time thoughts landed. Glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol