Play It Again
The sands of time change20 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I can see you have a sense of destiny, that somethings are simply meant to be, and I agree with you Carol, I know that if your life is tied up with God properly that can certainly happen, but I know my life with Elaine was meant to be, and yours with your husband, well done Carol, great story, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I can see you have a sense of destiny, that somethings are simply meant to be, and I agree with you Carol, I know that if your life is tied up with God properly that can certainly happen, but I know my life with Elaine was meant to be, and yours with your husband, well done Carol, great story, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Yes, I believe that regardless what difficult roads I traveled in life, I was meant to be with Mike. We fell in love and when no one else was there to care for him during his illness, I fought the doctors and everyone to make sure his life was the best it could be until the end. Others say they couldn't have done it but I don't regret a moment of it. I am glad that you too have found that kind of love with Elaine.
Smiles, Carol
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I completely understand, love is much much more than people think, well done
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Have a great day!
Comment from Carol Clark2
An interesting concept, to go back in time for one hour. You might split the last sentence of paragraph 5 into two sentences, the first with a question mark, and the second with a period. You write with great descriptions. Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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An interesting concept, to go back in time for one hour. You might split the last sentence of paragraph 5 into two sentences, the first with a question mark, and the second with a period. You write with great descriptions. Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thanks Carol. I will take a look at your suggestion and see if I can change it. Appreciate the review and your comments.
smiles, Carol
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Sorry, sometimes the internal editor doesn't quit.
Comment from Jacob1395
I would love to know what happens to Deacon and Alyssa next. You always do a brilliant job of making your characters feel like real people, Carol, and I always want to find out more about them. It would be great if there was a way how we could relieve a certain moment in our lives. An excellent piece.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I would love to know what happens to Deacon and Alyssa next. You always do a brilliant job of making your characters feel like real people, Carol, and I always want to find out more about them. It would be great if there was a way how we could relieve a certain moment in our lives. An excellent piece.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Jacob! Yes, I would do it in a flash if I could have one hour back in time. Starting with my husband and then my mom and my kids. It would be an awesome moment. Thanks again for yur kindness and awesome words.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
You are such a romantic, and know how to write dreamy love stories. This story also makes you wonder what you would go back to if you had a chance.
This subject would also make a great contest. Entrants could write a short story about someone who entered your machine and went back. Or they could write about where THEY would go.
I enjoyed this warm and fuzzy story.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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You are such a romantic, and know how to write dreamy love stories. This story also makes you wonder what you would go back to if you had a chance.
This subject would also make a great contest. Entrants could write a short story about someone who entered your machine and went back. Or they could write about where THEY would go.
I enjoyed this warm and fuzzy story.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Lorraine. I had fun with this one and thought it could possibly be a book of short stories with different people and different times and places. I enjoyed them finding each other. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Carol, you and your romances! They are uplifting and give a feeling of hopefulness. If only such a machine existed, I would visit often! i might just keep a sleeping bag in it and live there. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Carol, you and your romances! They are uplifting and give a feeling of hopefulness. If only such a machine existed, I would visit often! i might just keep a sleeping bag in it and live there. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Yes there are times I would like to zip back to if only for an hour. Being with my Honey would be my first chice and visiting my Mom, daughter and my son would be close follow-ups. Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I don't believe anything happens by chance. Not even in short stories. Everything happens for a reason. Thank you for sharing this tender love story for our reading pleasure.
The next day, in the middle of the city's bustling streets, (The following day)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I don't believe anything happens by chance. Not even in short stories. Everything happens for a reason. Thank you for sharing this tender love story for our reading pleasure.
The next day, in the middle of the city's bustling streets, (The following day)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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i agree but we don't always know the reason...but it was fun to write. I can imagine many stories of zipping back in time for an hour... Fun and interesting.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
What a unique story. I don't know if I would go back in time if it was just for an hour. If it didn't change anything what would be the point? But for them it did not change the past it changed the future. :-)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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What a unique story. I don't know if I would go back in time if it was just for an hour. If it didn't change anything what would be the point? But for them it did not change the past it changed the future. :-)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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It was just a thought that popped into my head and I wrote it...much like some of yours. I thank you so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment from patcelaw
This is so beautifully written and I enjoyed every minute it took to listen to the story. It flows very well when it is read it out and you kept this reader intrigued with the story. I wish you a very wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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This is so beautifully written and I enjoyed every minute it took to listen to the story. It flows very well when it is read it out and you kept this reader intrigued with the story. I wish you a very wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thanks Patricia for stopping by to listen to my story and enjoy it. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A really good story, Carol. I love the time travel aspect of your story. I love the soulmate piece as well. They were destined to changed each other's life story in such a destined sort of way.
Well written, engaging and fresh. I love it.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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A really good story, Carol. I love the time travel aspect of your story. I love the soulmate piece as well. They were destined to changed each other's life story in such a destined sort of way.
Well written, engaging and fresh. I love it.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I sometimes wonder where my mind travels at night and how I dream up these crazy thoughts, but hey! it's fun, right? Thanks for reading and enjoying as always.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Always fun!!
Comment from Kahlani
I'm so pleased the story had a happy ever after. I knew something would happen between them but didn't know until the end. But the idea of travelling back in time, it's coming.
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I'm so pleased the story had a happy ever after. I knew something would happen between them but didn't know until the end. But the idea of travelling back in time, it's coming.
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I love to have happy endings...It just makes me smile inside and out. Thank you for reading and enjoying.
Smiles, Carol