Spirited Justice
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Comment from Carol Clark2
Well-written chapter, with lots of tension and great dialogue. I like all the similes you used in your descriptions. Angelo seems to have developed a tender side toward his friend Carlos. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Well-written chapter, with lots of tension and great dialogue. I like all the similes you used in your descriptions. Angelo seems to have developed a tender side toward his friend Carlos. Nicely done!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I think he always liked Carlos until he found himself backed into a corner protecting Jose and cleaning up his messes, but to see him dying, shot by his own son, made him take a step back. Thank you for the awesome review and stars. A smile to end my day!
Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome. You did a great job on this chapter! Glad I made you smile. :)
Comment from BethShelby
This was extremely violent. How horrible to be shot by his own. I can't feel sorry for Hose. Does Carlos stay dead of does he get to come back? This story was very dramatic, and I enjoyed it.
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This was extremely violent. How horrible to be shot by his own. I can't feel sorry for Hose. Does Carlos stay dead of does he get to come back? This story was very dramatic, and I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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No I am afraid Carlos will stay dead.... not a happy situation for the Hernandez family but at least Alejandro can come home to his family if he wants. Thanks for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this chapter with us. I am guessing Angelo took the papers with him. It never really says that. I hope it's understood. I knew Jose was a jerk but never expected him to kill his father. This is a good write.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this chapter with us. I am guessing Angelo took the papers with him. It never really says that. I hope it's understood. I knew Jose was a jerk but never expected him to kill his father. This is a good write.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I was suppose to say he did, but I guess I better give it a second look. Thanks for pointing it out.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's no good; I had to come and read it, and it totally deserved another six. This was such an amazing chapter. I'm glad the bodyguards killed Jose; he deserved that after killing his own father! What a nasty piece of work he was. I really felt sorry for Carlos. He wanted so much for his son, but he ended up the rottenest apple in the crate. I am going to have a rest now and get my heartbeats under control! Superb writing, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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It's no good; I had to come and read it, and it totally deserved another six. This was such an amazing chapter. I'm glad the bodyguards killed Jose; he deserved that after killing his own father! What a nasty piece of work he was. I really felt sorry for Carlos. He wanted so much for his son, but he ended up the rottenest apple in the crate. I am going to have a rest now and get my heartbeats under control! Superb writing, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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You are too good to me...thank you with all my love. I felt sorry for Carlos too...as I wrote I was imagining those last seconds as he stared down the barrel of the gun...the pain he must have felt that his son who he had tried to give everything thought so little of him.
You take care of yourself and don't worry about me...the story will be hear when you are feeling better.
My smiles, hugs and love and lots of prayers are with you always,
Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Great job again. The way you describe the villa and the conflict between Carlos and his son is was so well done. I especially appreciated how you shared the emotions that Angelo faces. You've shared a gripping chapter. Well done again.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Great job again. The way you describe the villa and the conflict between Carlos and his son is was so well done. I especially appreciated how you shared the emotions that Angelo faces. You've shared a gripping chapter. Well done again.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Michael. I always appreciate your kindness and your thoughts regarding my post. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol