Silent Voices
Viewing comments for Prologue "She Lives"Verses of personification
32 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nicely written. You are very articulate without being a snob. You have a talent for expression. I enjoyed the journey you took us on. Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Nicely written. You are very articulate without being a snob. You have a talent for expression. I enjoyed the journey you took us on. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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That means a lot, Karen. Thank you!
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U R Welcome. Karen
Comment from QC Poet
Reading and writing poetry can take people who read as well as write it to many realms in or of our munds construction and happy places Thank you for Sharin your poetic writing
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Reading and writing poetry can take people who read as well as write it to many realms in or of our munds construction and happy places Thank you for Sharin your poetic writing
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much!
Xo
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Your poetry has a nice flow to it. A message of toughness and gentleness rolled into one package. The artwork is splendid. Good luck to you with all of your writing endeavors.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Your poetry has a nice flow to it. A message of toughness and gentleness rolled into one package. The artwork is splendid. Good luck to you with all of your writing endeavors.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Monica! :)
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day. Your presentation here is beautifully done, and I enjoyed listening to it. Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is very well written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day. Your presentation here is beautifully done, and I enjoyed listening to it. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much, Patricia!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This free verse uses metaphor, personification, and alliteration to describe rather your muse at the poem itself. I like the artwork you chose to illustrate your work.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of your day.
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Hi Jessica,
This free verse uses metaphor, personification, and alliteration to describe rather your muse at the poem itself. I like the artwork you chose to illustrate your work.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of your day.
Joan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Joan! Xo
Comment from nomi338
She sounds like the woman whose roar has the power to awaken the fools who remain asleep to the determined rise of women who will no longer be content to hide their shine beneath the blanket of male dominance. My sisters, I salute you.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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She sounds like the woman whose roar has the power to awaken the fools who remain asleep to the determined rise of women who will no longer be content to hide their shine beneath the blanket of male dominance. My sisters, I salute you.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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You are the BEST!
Thank you for this awesome comment.
Xo
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a beautiful poem of personification of poetry. Dry creative in your profound message. "She lives" is a powerful image.
Well done Jessica.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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This is a beautiful poem of personification of poetry. Dry creative in your profound message. "She lives" is a powerful image.
Well done Jessica.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I'm honored, Janet; thank you so much for this wonderful review!
Xo
Jess
Comment from royowen
I've often where the expression of words with great depth come gone, psychologists may know, and God certainly does, but this simple man is sometimes amazed, but they have a life of their own. More than ine muse? Beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I've often where the expression of words with great depth come gone, psychologists may know, and God certainly does, but this simple man is sometimes amazed, but they have a life of their own. More than ine muse? Beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Roy!
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Welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
That best part of these NaPoWriMo challenges/contests if I get to read wonderful poems every day. I know it's selfish. I'm sorry, but I really enjoyed reading this poem. I'm sorry, I'm out of sixes, but this poem is perfect.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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That best part of these NaPoWriMo challenges/contests if I get to read wonderful poems every day. I know it's selfish. I'm sorry, but I really enjoyed reading this poem. I'm sorry, I'm out of sixes, but this poem is perfect.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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That means so much to me, Barbara, thank you!!
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! What a stellar entry for your first Napowrimo post! I love it! And the metaphorical description could be of a woman or as you say your soul or of the muse of a poet.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Wow! What a stellar entry for your first Napowrimo post! I love it! And the metaphorical description could be of a woman or as you say your soul or of the muse of a poet.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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I am honored, Helen; thank you so very much!
Xoxo