The Night I Died
A Dream of ...16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The photo is beautiful Tom. This story is like a nightmare Tom and I think you should be grateful to be woken from from it. Arriving at the pearly gates in your PJs and all that pain gone because you actually feel nothing now. I always think a little pain means we are still alive which is a good thing. Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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The photo is beautiful Tom. This story is like a nightmare Tom and I think you should be grateful to be woken from from it. Arriving at the pearly gates in your PJs and all that pain gone because you actually feel nothing now. I always think a little pain means we are still alive which is a good thing. Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Nightmare? I would gladly accept sneaking by the gate to find where any cares are g o n e
Comment from GWHARGIS
So you were slipping into Heaven and your poor wife was going through Hell. Lol. This was a fantastical journey. I liked the premise of it (with the exception of dying.) Very well written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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So you were slipping into Heaven and your poor wife was going through Hell. Lol. This was a fantastical journey. I liked the premise of it (with the exception of dying.) Very well written. Gretchen
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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It was but a dream and she was dreaming perhaps of someone else, like me as I can see that happening
Maybe that is for another piece.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, again, I don't know what I like best, the writing or the picture. But both of them together make for a fantastic presentation of art, beauty, and a wonderful sense of humor at the end. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Wow, again, I don't know what I like best, the writing or the picture. But both of them together make for a fantastic presentation of art, beauty, and a wonderful sense of humor at the end. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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You know me well
I can tell
You r see astute
Like me
Frightening
Thank you
Comment from BethShelby
I love this photo. It looks like a painting. Did your really dream this on a night when your wife dreams of Hell or this this just Tom being Tom? It would be worderful to dream of heaven. I can't imagine dreaming of Hell. I have a problem picturing you in a gown. Maybe you could say tugged on your sleeve.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I love this photo. It looks like a painting. Did your really dream this on a night when your wife dreams of Hell or this this just Tom being Tom? It would be worderful to dream of heaven. I can't imagine dreaming of Hell. I have a problem picturing you in a gown. Maybe you could say tugged on your sleeve.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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Gown/ nightshirt?
I was cold. Good point, though.
And where I dreamed of heaven she saw me in hell, perhaps?
Comment from JSD
An amazing photo and an engaging piece of prose. I'm very jealous of your habitat. Your dreams are excellent and then we are brought nicely down to earth, literally, by your wife. And that's what wives are for, among other things!
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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An amazing photo and an engaging piece of prose. I'm very jealous of your habitat. Your dreams are excellent and then we are brought nicely down to earth, literally, by your wife. And that's what wives are for, among other things!
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I think she saw me headed where she saw me entering the heat and stink??? Idk
Comment from Bill Schott
I guess our dreams may forecast what we feel our chances are getting into a positive afterlife. If we can catch St. Peter napping, well, maybe there's a chance. The wife in the story needs to not eat spicy foods before sleep.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I guess our dreams may forecast what we feel our chances are getting into a positive afterlife. If we can catch St. Peter napping, well, maybe there's a chance. The wife in the story needs to not eat spicy foods before sleep.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2023
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I luv your humor seeing how you know me so well