Be Careful What You Wish For
When one door closes and a window opens21 total reviews
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent entry for the Western Writing Contest! This entry is very well written and well thought out and the characters interacted perfectly throughout the entire story! It also held my attention throughout the piece;-)
Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you and your family!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Excellent entry for the Western Writing Contest! This entry is very well written and well thought out and the characters interacted perfectly throughout the entire story! It also held my attention throughout the piece;-)
Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you and your family!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This was story had an unexpected turn, and I think you can make a good movie plot, and yeah be careful what you wish for. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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This was story had an unexpected turn, and I think you can make a good movie plot, and yeah be careful what you wish for. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from jmdg1954
Earl.
This is a well written western. From the names of the characters, names of the town and the jargon spoken and written.
All were believable. Is this your first attempt at a western?
Kifely tone,
John
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Earl.
This is a well written western. From the names of the characters, names of the town and the jargon spoken and written.
All were believable. Is this your first attempt at a western?
Kifely tone,
John
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond John. No I have quite a few westerns on my profile if you want to check them out. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from Sally Law
This is fantastic, Earl! You know I love your western stories. I didn't see any errors, but my eyes are giving up on me. It's tasking to write my own stuff.
You best be wearing a blue ribbon for this one! A mighty fine entry once again.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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This is fantastic, Earl! You know I love your western stories. I didn't see any errors, but my eyes are giving up on me. It's tasking to write my own stuff.
You best be wearing a blue ribbon for this one! A mighty fine entry once again.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond Sal. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from Julie Lau
Hey, this is good! You write well and if this is your chosen genre, then go for it. I didn't see any errors at all. Your story was well put together and had the appropriate sting in its tale. All the best - let's see more! Julie L
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Hey, this is good! You write well and if this is your chosen genre, then go for it. I didn't see any errors at all. Your story was well put together and had the appropriate sting in its tale. All the best - let's see more! Julie L
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond Julie. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Earl. This was amazing. The picture was amazing. Wiley took the way of having his boots on at the time of his death. He made sure that John S. "Shotgun" Harker and Tom did just that. Meanwhile he was true to the point, he told the Puma Creek Kid, he told him that he wouldn't fire a shot. Too bad for the kid. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Earl. This was amazing. The picture was amazing. Wiley took the way of having his boots on at the time of his death. He made sure that John S. "Shotgun" Harker and Tom did just that. Meanwhile he was true to the point, he told the Puma Creek Kid, he told him that he wouldn't fire a shot. Too bad for the kid. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
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Not a problem, I appreciated the story. You are so welcome, Earl.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good western story for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I enjoyed listening to it as the iPad read it to me. Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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This is a very good western story for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I enjoyed listening to it as the iPad read it to me. Patricia
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond Patricia. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I love authentic dialogue. Great work.
When did he empty his gun? Why did the sheriff even look? Curious.
I wonder how well a five foot four kid could operate the hammer of a Colt .45. (Oh, you should capitalize 'Colt") Maybe if he was a 98 pound five foot eight kid?
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I love authentic dialogue. Great work.
When did he empty his gun? Why did the sheriff even look? Curious.
I wonder how well a five foot four kid could operate the hammer of a Colt .45. (Oh, you should capitalize 'Colt") Maybe if he was a 98 pound five foot eight kid?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
Comment from country ranch writer
Nicely presentand informative why wiley git himself killed, he didn't want to go through the oaun and shiny the can't was going to finish him off, he'd rather go out with his bits on, a smart man as they say he killed two birds with one stone getting even with the blustering loud mouth kid.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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Nicely presentand informative why wiley git himself killed, he didn't want to go through the oaun and shiny the can't was going to finish him off, he'd rather go out with his bits on, a smart man as they say he killed two birds with one stone getting even with the blustering loud mouth kid.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
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Comment from Ben Colder
No truer words. I am prone to remember he that lived by the gun will die by the gun. Amazing how all that works. Good one, Earl. Thanks for sharing your old west story.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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No truer words. I am prone to remember he that lived by the gun will die by the gun. Amazing how all that works. Good one, Earl. Thanks for sharing your old west story.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I'm sorry it's taken so long to respond Ben. Thank you very mIuch for the six star review. appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.