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Faster Horses, Younger Women

Tom T. Hall almost wrote my life

38 total reviews 
Comment from jmdg1954
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Dang Stewball blew what was a fantastic week of money, booze and women.
Oh well. That's how life goes. One can never tell.

Nicely written and conveyed Terry. An enjoyable read.

Have a great day...
John

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
    John, thank you very much for reading. Terry.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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A humorous start to my morning, and I love all the "good ol' boy" Texas references and lingo. Of course, we knew he'd blow the entire 50K in short order, but the taxes owed was a nice twist. He was saving his last bottle of Johnny Walker Blue? I thought he bought a case? He blew through that too!

A fun story, Terry. Glad you shared it with us.

Pam

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
    Pam, thank you for reading and for your review. Terry.
Comment from damommy
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He spent $50,000 in a weekend. That took some doing. He should have stayed away from the faster horses, younger women, and older whiskey. But I guess the weekend was worth it to him.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
    Damommy, maybe he learned a lesson, thank you for reading and for your review. Terry.
Comment from Wendy G
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A fun story. And quite a twist at the end. I'm not sure, but I think lottery wins here are not taxable income. You wrote it well - an interesting story - I see you classified it as fiction. Lol.
Wendy

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
    Wendy, 100% fiction. Thank you for reading and for your review. Terry.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Ha ha ha your story it's very dynamic and it captures so many elements that it might happen to any of us. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
    Thank you for taking time to read and for your review. Terry.
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh no! He forgot all about the taxes. Of course, just that he even got the money at all in cash is surprising. As I thought they took the taxes first and whatever else it's supposed to go to like schools etc.

Was "Humperwhistles" a reference to our Humpwhistle? Or is that a real place? Is it plural or would it be Cowboy spoke is Humperwhistle's ?

Enjoyed your story and I am beginning to see a theme here. You're taking a song and use that as the inspiration / recipe for a story!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
    Helen, thank you for reading and for your review. There is a place in Dallas, I have never been there, called Humperdink's Brew Pub. I morphed the name to honor our friend Lee. Terry.
Comment from Teri7
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Terry, This is a very interesting true story you have penned. You used great descriptive words and very neat dialogue. At least you got out of that situation with some money left. I enjoyed reading this. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
    Teri, thank you very much for the six star rating. But I do want you to know that the story is 100% fiction. Terry.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Very funny read from beginning to end. What is even greater about this story was you could tell the racetrack would not end well but then you ended it with a perfect ending: no money, no young thing but a large tax bill.
Perfect!
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
    Mary, I am pleased you enjoyed the story. Thank you for reading. Terry
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is really amusing. You have such a way with words. What a way to blow $50,000. Sue Ellen came out of it in good shape. I was hoping as I read that they took the taxes out before he got the check. Of course, they didn't. It makes for a better last line.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
    Carol, thank you for reading and for your review. Terry
Comment from Ann M
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Glad that you're back at it. Very funny... always love the Texas references...stick to the Johnny in your comfy chair watching a movie....and writing!!

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2023
    Thanks for reading. Got the book coming out in October. Terry.