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Comment from BermyBye50
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Debi Pick Marquette,

This is a excellent tribute to a beautiful lifelong friendship. The photo brought a deserving chuckle and a smile to my face. You've captured the magic and beauty of the special trust we have in those we love as true friends.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023

Comment from Mario PIERRE
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A wonderful tribute to love, enduring friendship and joy. Not many people today can say the same thing today. It takes beautiful hearts to create beautiful friendship, and Debi, you have both.
Glad I stumbled on your lovely poem.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    Mario, you are always the greatest, and I have been meaning to ask you for some time now when your birthday is. Certain people touch us in our life, wherever it may be, virtual or home. They are both real life, and both very special friendships form. You my dear friend are one, and hope to write one for you someday. Thanks for the great review and comments, my dear friend.
reply by Mario PIERRE on 09-Apr-2023
    Tank you! Always a pleasure to read you
    I came from space to earth on a September 14th . The year is so vintage, I don't remember LOL
    I have a post forum a contest, you can read vite, it's called " Sunday Walk"
    Bye Debi!!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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It sounds like you two ladies share a very lovely and longlasting friendship. This is a lovely poem about what friends add to our lives, Debi. I love the final line. I bet Patty loves it too. Nicely done, cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    Hi Velda, you are always the greatest, and I have been meaning to ask you for some time now when your birthday is. Certain people touch us in our life, wherever it may be, virtual or home. They are both real life, and both very special friendships form. You my dear friend are one, and hope to write one for you someday. Thanks for the great review and comments, my dear friend.
reply by Pearl Edwards on 09-Apr-2023
    Thank you for that Debi. 26th April 1948 was my day.
Comment from Sanku
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40 years of friendship ! remarkable ! you have been blessed very few are fortunate to hold on to such friendship. You must really feel like sisters, may your friendship last for another 40 years! God bless.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    you are always the greatest, and I see that your birthday is coming up on May 5th . Certain people touch us in our life, wherever it may be, virtual or home. They are both real life, and both very special friendships form. You my dear friend are one, and hope to write one for you soon if that is ok. Thanks for the great review and comments, my dear friend.
reply by Sanku on 09-Apr-2023
    sure it is okay.
Comment from karenina
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A very "mooooooving" poem on friendship. (See what I did there?)

She's clearly a friend like no "udder" (Oh my, I can't stop myself!)

Is that a 14K cow bell around your neck?

LOL.

What is NO laughing matter is a forty-year friend!

Nice aabb rhyme scheme, sweet and heartfelt words...

Hope you both have a lovely Easter!

Karenina










 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    Awe, thank you my sweet cream!
    I do love your cow humor. But hay, what am I going to have to do, come over and sing you some mooosic to get you to bed at night so you can heal. I guess I am not much better, so I will milk this great review for all that its worth, as I am not in the mood to sleep myself. I know if I go to bed now, I will not feel like getting up to get the egg bakes in and get ready with all my Easter games for today's brunch. I guess we both may have to over calf-en-nate today, just to get thru. But if I don't see you sleeping tonight, we might have to lock horns and I may have to cream you, so don't get bullheaded about it. After all I am your Louise and you my Thelma, and we are not cow-ards and must watch out for each udder the best we can. You don't want me to come there and tip you into bed, do you? Now, mine were really baaaaad, oops wrong animal. See what happens when you don't sleep at night. Lol...
    Love ya my little bunny. God's blessings be with you on this day and always!
reply by karenina on 09-Apr-2023
    I give up! In the battle of bad puns, you win!

    (I'm not "calf" as good as you!)

    :)
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very nice and very well written poem about your best friend. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the picture you used. Thank you for sharing with us. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    Thanks to you for always being the sweetest have the nicest things to say, dear Teri. You are so appreciated with so much love.
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Thank you sis for commemorating another birthday of one who really is your sis. You have a unique way of expressing your compassionate heart. Your words flow so easily and your thoughts are always congruent. And almost everything at the very end has that little creative twist. Embrace the love from above.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    What am I going to do with you sweet brother. You are spoiling me so much, that I think I will be sending adoption papers for us both to sign soon. Lol...
    You are such a class act guy, and cannot wait to talk a little more, especially after the mysterious email. Thanks so much for being the best guy ever. Easter's Blessings and a big hug to you and my sweet virtual extended family. Thank you Jesus, for among all you have done for me, for sending this loving man my way.
reply by Dr. Nad on 11-Apr-2023
    The feelings are mutual my sister and I know we can never have enough positive godly relationships and friendships and family in our life! I sure thought I had responded to you within the last two days. It seems to have gone away on my end and I don't know if it ever reached you on yours. God bless and I hope your week is going well for you and the Fam.
Comment from Brandon Clark
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You've penned a humorous and excellent dedication with this and the heartfelt message shines through blindingly clear!

Wonderful and joyous, this was a fun and genuinely-scribed post!
Brandon

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
    Brandon, you are always the greatest, and I have been meaning to ask you for some time now when your birthday is. Certain people touch us in our life, wherever it may be, virtual or home. They are both real life, and both very special friendships form. You my dear friend are one, and hope to write one for you someday. Thanks for the great review and comments, my dear friend.
Comment from Mintybee
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This was a beautiful comment on friendship. I love the tongue-in-cheek joke at the end, "Besides, I need to keep you near, 'cause you know way too much." I enjoy the number of personal poems you post. I've never been good with writing about people I know. You do it well, and manage a pleasing mix of the heartfelt and the lighthearted.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023

Comment from Carol Clark2
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I love the humor of your final line, after expressing all the fun things you two did together and the reasons you've remained friends over the years. It's wonderful you've been able to remain friends for so long. Steady rhythm and good rhymes make this flow well. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2023