I Know
An Ekphrastic Poem For the club Challenge27 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
A beautiful poem.
-Life has it's ebb and flows.
-Peace flows through your lines and shines hope, to not surrender to darkness.
-Readers may feel a special light reflected through your poem.
All the best for 2023. A true joy to read you poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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A beautiful poem.
-Life has it's ebb and flows.
-Peace flows through your lines and shines hope, to not surrender to darkness.
-Readers may feel a special light reflected through your poem.
All the best for 2023. A true joy to read you poem.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Wow! Thank you so very much, yes we all need hope, as always very much appreciated, have a wonderful New Year****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This twelve-word poem, I Know, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that there is still a powerful God beyond what we may be able to see today. Neat.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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This twelve-word poem, I Know, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that there is still a powerful God beyond what we may be able to see today. Neat.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated, have a wonderful New Year****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, we need to remember that no matter what happens the sun still shines. I love this ekphrastic poem and the picture is definitely a winner for this great expressive poetic piece.
Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful new year!
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Yes, we need to remember that no matter what happens the sun still shines. I love this ekphrastic poem and the picture is definitely a winner for this great expressive poetic piece.
Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful new year!
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated, have a wonderful New Year****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is a beautiful image to write about
with a very nice presentation, kahpot.
-You wrote a very good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery with "dark waters" and
"calm foundations." A good contrast, as well.
-A very good concluding line that inspires
with the shining sun representing hope.
-We need that in the new hear; hope
it is a good one for you!!!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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-It is a beautiful image to write about
with a very nice presentation, kahpot.
-You wrote a very good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery with "dark waters" and
"calm foundations." A good contrast, as well.
-A very good concluding line that inspires
with the shining sun representing hope.
-We need that in the new hear; hope
it is a good one for you!!!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated, have a wonderful New Year****kahpot
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You are very welcome, and thank you for the good wishes!!! We all need a good one, I think.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a lovely verse that (obviously) takes the artwork and gives it a deeper meaning. Well done on theme selection and taking your reader in a different direction. I love the Japanese art, but your poem is timeless and relates to so many other meanings as well. Loved it!
Melissa
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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This is a lovely verse that (obviously) takes the artwork and gives it a deeper meaning. Well done on theme selection and taking your reader in a different direction. I love the Japanese art, but your poem is timeless and relates to so many other meanings as well. Loved it!
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated, have a wonderful New Year****kahpot
Comment from Aussie
A splendid Japanese print or woodcut. Your words are perfect for the subject. And you are right - tsunami shakes the foundations and the sun shines brightly.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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A splendid Japanese print or woodcut. Your words are perfect for the subject. And you are right - tsunami shakes the foundations and the sun shines brightly.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated, have a wonderful New Year****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author:
Your poem can have many meanings. One is that God can be our sun during turbulent times. It can also speak of man's resilience in the face of tragedy or sadness.
Excellent Club challenge entry.
Happy New Year!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Author:
Your poem can have many meanings. One is that God can be our sun during turbulent times. It can also speak of man's resilience in the face of tragedy or sadness.
Excellent Club challenge entry.
Happy New Year!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always much appreciated, have a wonderful New Year****kahpot
Comment from Karyn2
What a super ekphrastic poem! It is so perfect for the picture and has a true wisdom in the words. I love that in the midst of turmoil, the sun still shines. It is our beacon in the dark times, as though it offers us a silver lining of hope that things will be alright. Really delightful to make such a wise, strong and profound statement in 12 words!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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What a super ekphrastic poem! It is so perfect for the picture and has a true wisdom in the words. I love that in the midst of turmoil, the sun still shines. It is our beacon in the dark times, as though it offers us a silver lining of hope that things will be alright. Really delightful to make such a wise, strong and profound statement in 12 words!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Thank you so very much, I think some pictures inspire me and most wannabe writers, I am so happy that you understood what I was trying to write, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there my friend, no that is a beautiful Ekphrastic poem. Does it fit to that photo it was extraordinary.
Happy New Year!
-Kerry
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Hello there my friend, no that is a beautiful Ekphrastic poem. Does it fit to that photo it was extraordinary.
Happy New Year!
-Kerry
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Wow! Thank you so very much, I enjoy these challenges, as always very much appreciated, Have a wonderful New Year****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
I really like the inspirational tone of this piece. A perfect way to begin the new year - on a note of hope and optimism. Lovely interpretation of this artwork. Well said!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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I really like the inspirational tone of this piece. A perfect way to begin the new year - on a note of hope and optimism. Lovely interpretation of this artwork. Well said!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Wow! Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated, have a wonderful New Year****kahpot