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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the sentiment here and if only this poem had a consistent metre it would be magical. Good end rhymes, words can indeed uplift and sooth anyone who is suffering grief, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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I love the sentiment here and if only this poem had a consistent metre it would be magical. Good end rhymes, words can indeed uplift and sooth anyone who is suffering grief, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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You are quite correct, thanks Dolly!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Words can lead a reader across a rough patch -that is true and they can do the same for the writer.
One's choice of words can open many gates - certainly, and oft times we don't realise it until the words are out. Love this Terza Rima, JLR.
Well done, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Words can lead a reader across a rough patch -that is true and they can do the same for the writer.
One's choice of words can open many gates - certainly, and oft times we don't realise it until the words are out. Love this Terza Rima, JLR.
Well done, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you Valda! I do appreciate your validation.
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for sharing this cautionary word, pun intended, in the Terza Rima form. I enjoyed this, dear J. You always serve it up so eloquently! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you for sharing this cautionary word, pun intended, in the Terza Rima form. I enjoyed this, dear J. You always serve it up so eloquently! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hi Sal! Thanks for your thoughtfulness and kind words.
Comment from zanya
Yes words matter-don't they ? sometimes we forget just how much -the sentiment effectively captured here in these well scripted lines - a delight to read
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Yes words matter-don't they ? sometimes we forget just how much -the sentiment effectively captured here in these well scripted lines - a delight to read
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thanks Zanya!
Comment from royowen
Well done with the terza rima, yes indeed, a writer's can be anything from a great blessing to being an absolute curse, but we carry on, because we must. An excellent post, look who's becoming a most consistent virtuoso, well done Jim, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Well done with the terza rima, yes indeed, a writer's can be anything from a great blessing to being an absolute curse, but we carry on, because we must. An excellent post, look who's becoming a most consistent virtuoso, well done Jim, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello Roy, I do appreciate your blessings and kind words.
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Most welcome
Comment from Mariana Convery
As writers, this has an intriguing theme. You do a great job with your rhyming scheme here, which speaks to the importance of the chosen words.Great job on this closed form.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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As writers, this has an intriguing theme. You do a great job with your rhyming scheme here, which speaks to the importance of the chosen words.Great job on this closed form.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Mariana, thanks for sharing your thoughts and validation.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Terza Rima poem you have penned for the Potlatch Poetry event. You used very good cautious words and very nice imagery. I am going to book case so I can go back to it and maybe I can write this type of poem. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This is a very well written Terza Rima poem you have penned for the Potlatch Poetry event. You used very good cautious words and very nice imagery. I am going to book case so I can go back to it and maybe I can write this type of poem. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Blessings for yourself and good luck!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading. What phrase I poet might write could be something totally different than what a reader might read. It all depends on their reference or maybe their background.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading. What phrase I poet might write could be something totally different than what a reader might read. It all depends on their reference or maybe their background.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This terza rima, A Writer's Caution, has the proper formatting and reminds the writers and readers that words are all and they need to be big when necessary, small when appropriate, but always readable and understood.
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This terza rima, A Writer's Caution, has the proper formatting and reminds the writers and readers that words are all and they need to be big when necessary, small when appropriate, but always readable and understood.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thanks Bill
Comment from Sugarray77
You have done an excellent job on this Terza Rima, Jim. They are a difficult form and you make it look so easy. I enjoyed reading it and think it answers the prompt beautifully. :)
Melissa
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You have done an excellent job on this Terza Rima, Jim. They are a difficult form and you make it look so easy. I enjoyed reading it and think it answers the prompt beautifully. :)
Melissa
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Hi friend! Thank you!🙏🙏