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A swan song of a leaf

I'm back home

38 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
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I am glad that you are okay! Everyone was really worried about you for a while there. I pray for a swift recovery for you. Thank you for sharing this, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2022

Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Welcome home! So nice to have you back! I like your indomitable spirit and wish you a speedy-but-everlasting recovery!

And what a great piece to begin your return with!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Thanks, Rachelle.
    I am grateful to be back home and in recovery. Thanks for your good wishes.
    Have a wonderful day!
    Jesse
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Jesse, first welcome back. Second, this short account is beautifully written. Third, what an amazing attitude you present with both your experience that is now water under the bridge and the future that awaits you. Exceptional insights. Terry.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Thanks, Terry, for this marvelous review.
    I am grateful to be back and on the mend.
    Your six stars are well appreciated, my friend! The future awaits us all!
    Jesse
Comment from aryr
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It is good to have your back home, Jesse. Welcome back. All the trails and tribulation were definitely worth the effort. I am so glad that you are weller than before your surgery. Blessings.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I am glad you are finally on the mend Jesse and your write here is positive and uplifing. It is only when we go through a trauma like this that we appreciate the simple pleasure of walking and breathing in the fresh air. We don't know how lucky we are until something vital is taken from us. I wish you well in your recovery, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

Comment from Gloria ....
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What a wonderfully poetic announcement of your return. I particularly enjoyed the pathway lined with bountiful trees and the note of acceptance.

Glad to hear you are doing well and have returned to share your thoughts and observations here.

Always a pleasure.

Gloria

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Thanks, Gloria for pointing out the lines you liked best.
    I am grateful to be back home and recovering nicely. I hope to walk with the aid of a walker any day now. Thanks for always signing in with your thoughts.
    Have a lovely day,
    Jesse
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I came back to Fanstory when there were APBs out on you. I was caught up in it even though I wasn't familiar with you. But I like how you write. It's a rich tapestry of words. Welcome back. Gretchen

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Gretchen.
    I am grateful to be back home again and among those like you at FS. I appreciate your kind words and for welcoming me back to the world of the living.
    I will be walking soon and will have someone take a picture of me walking and post it on Fan Story.
    Have a wonderful day!
    Jesse
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-It is great to see your post, Jesse. Extra stars for that and for your recovery.
-I don't think it was necessary to recount what you went through, either.
-It is more important moving forward, and it sounds like you have good people around you, and you are doing well.
-I am glad you will be using the walker soon, and then not even using that. It is wonderful news.
-I like your descriptions and observations about the leaf.
-I like the poem at the end about happiness, home, and love.
-A very nice ending, too. We were pulling for you, hoping things were going okay!!!!
-Welcome back, good friendð???ð???

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Pam, for your detailed review. I am grateful to be back home again. I appreciate you choosing the lines you liked best and for giving me examples of what worked best as well.
    Thank you, my friend!
    Jesse
reply by Pam (respa) on 18-Oct-2022
    You are very welcome, Jesse, and I am glad you are back home, too. I appreciate your reply, too!!
Comment from Michele Harber
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I love the idea of the leaf essentially dying peacefully in its sleep. It's a very soothing image. And the contrast you make between yourself and the dying leaf is very reassuring. You have such a positive and optimistic attitude.

I was particularly taken with the lines:

Happiness is found
Where you expect it to be
Home where there is love

They're so beautiful, and so true!

Good luck with your recovery. I know you'll be walking without assistance in as short a time as is humanly possible.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    You are right, Michele I will be walking as soon as I am able and I am making strides toward this goal. Thanks for your good wishes, my friend. I will always consider you one of my good friends.
    Jesse
reply by Michele Harber on 18-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Jesse. I take your considering me a good friend as a high compliment.

    You don't strike me as someone who suffers fools gladly, as they say, and
    I'm flattered and grateful that you hold me in high regard. I hope you know that's totally mutual!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    The feelings are the same as mine.
    Take care, my friend.
    Jesse
reply by Michele Harber on 18-Oct-2022
    Now I'm blushing. 😊
Comment from Wendy G
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Hi Jesse, I have been following your journey and praying for your operation to be a success, so I am glad to hear this news. I wish you the very best.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
    Thanks, Wendy. I am grateful to be back home again and with friends and Sunny.
    Thanks for sending me all the best.
    Your prayers and good wishes are appreciated, my friend!
    Jesse