Feverence
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Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this story. I found it very entertaining and can actually relate to it. I love the accompanying photo. That guy is HOT! I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I really enjoyed reading this story. I found it very entertaining and can actually relate to it. I love the accompanying photo. That guy is HOT! I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Yes, he's definitely my "type." I'm glad you think he's hot, too! Thanks for the very nice review. I totally appreciate it.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, I can usually read and guess who has written a post, and mostly be right. But I have to admit, I have no idea who wrote this. But I wish I did, because I want more. Some mighty fine descriptive writing with a very unique style and tone. Outstanding! I'm just sorry I don't have a six. Good luck in the contest! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Wow, I can usually read and guess who has written a post, and mostly be right. But I have to admit, I have no idea who wrote this. But I wish I did, because I want more. Some mighty fine descriptive writing with a very unique style and tone. Outstanding! I'm just sorry I don't have a six. Good luck in the contest! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Your sweet words are worth far more. Thank you for this great review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Your descriptions are fantastic and the reason I'm giving you six stars for this hilarious story! I can see everything as if I am there in the meeting.
And what a surprise ending you have for us. Oh, to be that in lust with someone again, lol!
Whoever you are writing this - it is fantastic and I wish you the best of luck.
Pam
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Your descriptions are fantastic and the reason I'm giving you six stars for this hilarious story! I can see everything as if I am there in the meeting.
And what a surprise ending you have for us. Oh, to be that in lust with someone again, lol!
Whoever you are writing this - it is fantastic and I wish you the best of luck.
Pam
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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I simply love this review. Thank you for making my day with your kind words, encouragement and well-wishes for the contest. All are very much appreciated.
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
Damn. That was both well written and funny as hell. I'm not a romance novel reader but I think I'd read one if you wrote one. Well paced and held my attention from the first line to the last line. Excellent job. Good luck in the contest. When is the vote held? I can't imagine anyone submitting something better.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Damn. That was both well written and funny as hell. I'm not a romance novel reader but I think I'd read one if you wrote one. Well paced and held my attention from the first line to the last line. Excellent job. Good luck in the contest. When is the vote held? I can't imagine anyone submitting something better.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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You are a wonderful reviewer! Thank you for this thoughtful and encouraging review! I'm not positive when the vote is, but I'll get back to you shortly.
I just read the listing, and it says the voting begins on Friday.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written contest entry for New Word for Falling in Love contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This is a very cute and very well written contest entry for New Word for Falling in Love contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thanks very much!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It was cute and fun to read. Good luck with the contest.
His voice sizzles my ear drums to little, crispy filaments. (eardrums)
I notice that their stares of incredulity have been replaced by those of alarm. (you can omit 'that' it's not needed)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It was cute and fun to read. Good luck with the contest.
His voice sizzles my ear drums to little, crispy filaments. (eardrums)
I notice that their stares of incredulity have been replaced by those of alarm. (you can omit 'that' it's not needed)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Olivanne Marsh
Feverence is a great word for it. A bit over the top, but so well done. Too bad I've never really had it, I could relate. How I envy people who can feel that strongly about someone else...even someone they hardly know. My guess is feverence is just the first symptom of falling in love. It's the attraction that morphs into love. I really liked so many of the touches in this piece, like the co-worker (company every mom) who adds a cookie to the glass of water thought. Perfect. Good luck in the contest. I loved what you did with the prompt.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Feverence is a great word for it. A bit over the top, but so well done. Too bad I've never really had it, I could relate. How I envy people who can feel that strongly about someone else...even someone they hardly know. My guess is feverence is just the first symptom of falling in love. It's the attraction that morphs into love. I really liked so many of the touches in this piece, like the co-worker (company every mom) who adds a cookie to the glass of water thought. Perfect. Good luck in the contest. I loved what you did with the prompt.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Thanks for this super encouraging review.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice word. Very nicely done. Nice writing.
I'm not exactly sure what a cookie would cure/help, though. lol
Fever and ...
Good luck in the contest and best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Nice word. Very nicely done. Nice writing.
I'm not exactly sure what a cookie would cure/help, though. lol
Fever and ...
Good luck in the contest and best wishes.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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If you were a mom, you'd know that a cookie cures whatever ails you.
I appreciate this very nice review. Thank you!
Comment from nomi338
Once your world has been rocked, you may well need to taste a lemon to wipe the smile off your face. A bath of cold ice may help shake you up to the desired degree. Otherwise, someone may discover the source of your discomfort.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Once your world has been rocked, you may well need to taste a lemon to wipe the smile off your face. A bath of cold ice may help shake you up to the desired degree. Otherwise, someone may discover the source of your discomfort.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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So worth it, though!! Thanks for the fun review.
Comment from lyenochka
Fabulous entry for this contest! Loved all the symptoms of Feverence and how it feels. It's great for the narrator that the feelings seem to be mutual. Is a DM a "direct message"?
This should do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Fabulous entry for this contest! Loved all the symptoms of Feverence and how it feels. It's great for the narrator that the feelings seem to be mutual. Is a DM a "direct message"?
This should do well in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2022
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Yes. PM is private message; DM is direct message.
Thanks for the review. Since it's your contest, I'm happy you like it!
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Love the word - Feverence!