Why You?
Reversed Joining Nonets20 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A perfect couple of nonets with warm and loving sentiments of the love and tranquility that finding a soul mate brings, I enjoyed the journey here, a magical write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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A perfect couple of nonets with warm and loving sentiments of the love and tranquility that finding a soul mate brings, I enjoyed the journey here, a magical write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Kahpot,
Your beautiful words make the reader yearn for this unique, true love. I like your word choice: overcame, shining presence, starless nights. You paint an image of love borne out of sadness and despair.
Excellent work,
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Kahpot,
Your beautiful words make the reader yearn for this unique, true love. I like your word choice: overcame, shining presence, starless nights. You paint an image of love borne out of sadness and despair.
Excellent work,
Good luck!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You?re welcome, Kahpot.😊
Comment from LateBloomer
Kahpot, your poetry writing keeps getting better and better. Your poem is a beautiful declaration of love. Your words glow with love.
I especially liked:
never turning from hurdles met
just overcame, replacing with love
a shining presence on starless nights
Well done. Great Nonet format. Excellent photo choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Kahpot, your poetry writing keeps getting better and better. Your poem is a beautiful declaration of love. Your words glow with love.
I especially liked:
never turning from hurdles met
just overcame, replacing with love
a shining presence on starless nights
Well done. Great Nonet format. Excellent photo choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2022
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Wow! Thank you so much, I am really glad that you think my writing has improved, so many (including you) have helped so much I am happy that all your help maybe sinking in, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
And this could be a great entry for the love poem contest, too! I like how well formed your double nonet is and how you explained the happiness you found in the beloved. I especially liked "carving a future
out of darkness" and that you presented it with white font on the black background! Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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And this could be a great entry for the love poem contest, too! I like how well formed your double nonet is and how you explained the happiness you found in the beloved. I especially liked "carving a future
out of darkness" and that you presented it with white font on the black background! Great job!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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From great teachers come inspired pupils, Thank you for your wonderful comments, so encouraging, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from harmony13
I liked the layout of the author's words. I found the words to be positive,
uplifting, meaningful, descriptive and creative. I thought about the theme
of these words and how well the author expressed. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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I liked the layout of the author's words. I found the words to be positive,
uplifting, meaningful, descriptive and creative. I thought about the theme
of these words and how well the author expressed. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments these words.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your double nonet is in perfect form, kahpot. Great job
with the syllable count per line of both. Your words were
descriptive, flowed well, and created a great feeling of
love between you and 'your girl.' I liked the blank line
between the two nonets. The art choice was beautiful
and perfect for your heart felt words.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Your double nonet is in perfect form, kahpot. Great job
with the syllable count per line of both. Your words were
descriptive, flowed well, and created a great feeling of
love between you and 'your girl.' I liked the blank line
between the two nonets. The art choice was beautiful
and perfect for your heart felt words.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you Jan, it is always a pleasure to receive encouragement from a writer of your caliber, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Blue Dreams
Wonderful piece written with a good knowledge of what it means to look at a woman with true love and admiration
I can see nothing to make this a better piece ty for sharing with me
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Wonderful piece written with a good knowledge of what it means to look at a woman with true love and admiration
I can see nothing to make this a better piece ty for sharing with me
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LisaMay
This is masterfully done! From struggling to form nonet poems myself, I know how much thought has to go into trying different words to adjust and fit suitable line lengths... while also making sense and developing your concept. So it is a beautiful blend of skill portraying emotional intelligence and the serendipity of meeting the right someone at the right time.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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This is masterfully done! From struggling to form nonet poems myself, I know how much thought has to go into trying different words to adjust and fit suitable line lengths... while also making sense and developing your concept. So it is a beautiful blend of skill portraying emotional intelligence and the serendipity of meeting the right someone at the right time.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Wow! Thank you for your exceptional comments and review so encouraging, you have made my day, as always so very much appreciated****kahpot
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happy to deliver stars for a great poem.
Comment from leather
You have a lovely presentation with the combined image, background color, and light text against the dark background. The poem could qualify as a subject of love too.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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You have a lovely presentation with the combined image, background color, and light text against the dark background. The poem could qualify as a subject of love too.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Very well done here. Your two conjoining nonets are shaped very well, with what I know is the careful choice of words, that are true to the meaning of the poem. There is much to be learned about sound from shape.
You most definitely have improved. And most poetically as well. :))
Gloria
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Very well done here. Your two conjoining nonets are shaped very well, with what I know is the careful choice of words, that are true to the meaning of the poem. There is much to be learned about sound from shape.
You most definitely have improved. And most poetically as well. :))
Gloria
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot