Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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37 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun and funny take on the Favorite Things. Loved the picture and the trip down memory lane with penny loafers and real Christmas tree.
Well done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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A fun and funny take on the Favorite Things. Loved the picture and the trip down memory lane with penny loafers and real Christmas tree.
Well done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thank you and smiling back!
Comment from lyenochka
This is a cute list of favorite things and I agree seeing a child's smile and admiring an eagle's flight and flowers are some of my favorites, too. I think the meter of the poem didn't quite match the song.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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This is a cute list of favorite things and I agree seeing a child's smile and admiring an eagle's flight and flowers are some of my favorites, too. I think the meter of the poem didn't quite match the song.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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You are so right and yes it is not perfect at all.
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written my friends, but following the song best in my head, one needs a feminine rhyme at the the first two lines in each verse, 11 syllables, and 10 syllables in the second two line with a single syllable at the end of the two last lines. Four syllables in the first three lines, (you've got five in the fist line) the last two lines aren't too bad. (I was a semi professional songwriter in another life) well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Beautifully written my friends, but following the song best in my head, one needs a feminine rhyme at the the first two lines in each verse, 11 syllables, and 10 syllables in the second two line with a single syllable at the end of the two last lines. Four syllables in the first three lines, (you've got five in the fist line) the last two lines aren't too bad. (I was a semi professional songwriter in another life) well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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I should have done a template of the original lyrics, thanks for this input. My dance step is quite off with two left feet and being left-handed :)
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You did well, it?s not easy.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the ...My Favorite Things writing prompt Contest...
Your poem is very funny, I love your sense of humor.
Good poem with a great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision..
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -- Atticus
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Excellent entry for the ...My Favorite Things writing prompt Contest...
Your poem is very funny, I love your sense of humor.
Good poem with a great presentation and imagery. It flows well with descriptive words that paint a clear poetic vision..
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -- Atticus
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much ... the meter is off, I should have done a template of the original lyrics, thanks for this input. My dance step is quite off with two left feet and being left-handed :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
By George, I think he or she has got it. They could write of rain on the plains in Spain to consummate that it is or was Eliza that wrote this piece of literature. Nice.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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By George, I think he or she has got it. They could write of rain on the plains in Spain to consummate that it is or was Eliza that wrote this piece of literature. Nice.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Wow and thank you!
Comment from leather
You chose a nice picture; you might have had a hard time finding a picture of corned beef hash. The poem has a nice ring to it and probably set Julie to dancing again. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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You chose a nice picture; you might have had a hard time finding a picture of corned beef hash. The poem has a nice ring to it and probably set Julie to dancing again. Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Smiles back!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great job on this poem about using the pattern of the popular song. Although your favourite things are quite different from the original, they are all things that can be enjoyed. Thank you for this.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Great job on this poem about using the pattern of the popular song. Although your favourite things are quite different from the original, they are all things that can be enjoyed. Thank you for this.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2022
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Anne, thanks for your review and comments! I should have done a template of the original lyrics. My dance step is quite off with two left feet and being left-handed :)
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You are welcome
Comment from Lilly Flowers
Haha - this is cute and I think you did a great job with this writing challenge. I happen to love that song so it was easy for me to keep the tune in my head. Well done. Regards, Lilly
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Haha - this is cute and I think you did a great job with this writing challenge. I happen to love that song so it was easy for me to keep the tune in my head. Well done. Regards, Lilly
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Lilly, smiles back to you!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Who could possibly have a problem with any of your favorite things? They must be everyone's favorite. "New tennis shoes" "paying with cash" You betcha these are some of life's better rewards.
Well said
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Who could possibly have a problem with any of your favorite things? They must be everyone's favorite. "New tennis shoes" "paying with cash" You betcha these are some of life's better rewards.
Well said
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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Thanks much Gary!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
There are so many things in life to appreciate. If we take the time to think about all the things we have to be thankful, we may live less stressful. I like that picture it is so cute. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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There are so many things in life to appreciate. If we take the time to think about all the things we have to be thankful, we may live less stressful. I like that picture it is so cute. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2022
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All smiles, thank you!
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You are welcome.