Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Mother Mary's Dream"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a well written poem. I love the picture. She looks like an angel dancing in the sky, going to heaven. Dancing underneath the moon lit sky. She is lost in sweet music as she twirls and hovers. What more could you ask for? Not having a care in the universe. Thank you for the warm poem.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This is a well written poem. I love the picture. She looks like an angel dancing in the sky, going to heaven. Dancing underneath the moon lit sky. She is lost in sweet music as she twirls and hovers. What more could you ask for? Not having a care in the universe. Thank you for the warm poem.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Carolyn, thank you. You added the touch of sparkle in your comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem has a romantic and fantastical feel to it and I felt I had wings floating over the cosmos whilst reading. An uplifting write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Your poem has a romantic and fantastical feel to it and I felt I had wings floating over the cosmos whilst reading. An uplifting write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Much appreciated Dolly, thank you!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You did a tremendous job with the prompt. It's not easy to craft a poem around an image, but you've done just that. The descriptive language you used creates vivid imagery which helps the reader emotionally connect to your writing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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You did a tremendous job with the prompt. It's not easy to craft a poem around an image, but you've done just that. The descriptive language you used creates vivid imagery which helps the reader emotionally connect to your writing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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K.L. I am very appreciative of your strong validation of this poem.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this Easter poem with a unique focus on Mother Mary who suffered so much at seeing the crucifixion of our Lord. But I like how you see her rejoicing in Him in all of creation.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you for this Easter poem with a unique focus on Mother Mary who suffered so much at seeing the crucifixion of our Lord. But I like how you see her rejoicing in Him in all of creation.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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lyenochka, thank you so much for your review and Happy Easter.
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Happy Easter to you, Jim !
Comment from Raul1
The poem you have written is poetic and spiritual. It brings me back to God when I read it. Well written! Well done! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good job!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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The poem you have written is poetic and spiritual. It brings me back to God when I read it. Well written! Well done! Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good job!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Raul, thank you as always and Happy Easter.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your club poem, JLR. I enjoyed
reading it. Your words are special and so well thought out
esp for Easter. They read smoothly and create great imagery.
I could see everything as I read. Your poem is well-organized, too.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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You did a great job with your club poem, JLR. I enjoyed
reading it. Your words are special and so well thought out
esp for Easter. They read smoothly and create great imagery.
I could see everything as I read. Your poem is well-organized, too.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Jan, thank you for this wonderful prompt.
Comment from Gina Schneller
Beautiful poem. Beautiful writing. And I love the artwork! Very magical and intriguing. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Beautiful poem. Beautiful writing. And I love the artwork! Very magical and intriguing. Thank you so much for sharing with us all. Best of luck in your writing journey.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Gina, thank you for the review, Happy Easter.
Comment from 1Dreamer
I love this artwork that you chose to accompany your ethereal words spilling over with a mother's elation. Such a different way to look at the subject but so beautiful. Happy Easter to you!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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I love this artwork that you chose to accompany your ethereal words spilling over with a mother's elation. Such a different way to look at the subject but so beautiful. Happy Easter to you!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful poem about the mother of our Lord through her dream. I always love to see the word "Kestrel " used as it's one if my granddaughters middle name.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading Ottava Rima.
Well done and Happy Easter.
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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A beautiful poem about the mother of our Lord through her dream. I always love to see the word "Kestrel " used as it's one if my granddaughters middle name.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading Ottava Rima.
Well done and Happy Easter.
Janet
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Janet, I smile back what a special grand daughter she must be! Happy Easter!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Mother Mary's Dream, gives the readers a happy sense of both Mary's state of mind then, as well as her trek through the cosmos since her time on earth was through.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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This poem, Mother Mary's Dream, gives the readers a happy sense of both Mary's state of mind then, as well as her trek through the cosmos since her time on earth was through.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2022
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Thanks Bill, Happy Easter.