Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Invaluable"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from harmony13
What an ispiring poem! The author's words are clear, positive,
uplifting, meaningful, descriptive and creative. I pondered on these words
when my 5 year old grandson calls each day. The author's poem gives us a different way to look at the negatives of life. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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What an ispiring poem! The author's words are clear, positive,
uplifting, meaningful, descriptive and creative. I pondered on these words
when my 5 year old grandson calls each day. The author's poem gives us a different way to look at the negatives of life. Great Poem!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Harmony13
Comment from Wendy G
You are exactly right as you list the things which are really important in one's life, often the simple pleasures and attitudes. A very thoughtful and reflective poem, and a well written one. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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You are exactly right as you list the things which are really important in one's life, often the simple pleasures and attitudes. A very thoughtful and reflective poem, and a well written one. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Wendy.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Invaluable ', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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' Invaluable ', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Duchess
You're very welcome.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Well done. This acrostic poem comes at the prompt from a slightly different angle from what I have seen. Each line holds a very important message.
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Well done. This acrostic poem comes at the prompt from a slightly different angle from what I have seen. Each line holds a very important message.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Paul, thank you, I do tend to break ranks with the herd.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine acrostic and as we gain experience in life we realise where our loyalties lie and what is most important to us and it is never our possessions, it is always friends and family, nature and the simple things in life like an ambient sunset, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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A fine acrostic and as we gain experience in life we realise where our loyalties lie and what is most important to us and it is never our possessions, it is always friends and family, nature and the simple things in life like an ambient sunset, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a well-done Acrostic. Invaluable - there are so many things in life that we seemingly just take for granted, but they are the things we should cherish and enjoy.
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This is a well-done Acrostic. Invaluable - there are so many things in life that we seemingly just take for granted, but they are the things we should cherish and enjoy.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thanks Anne
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You are welcome
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It is a wonderful time you get to share true love. Innocent love. Thank you for sharing this poem. The picture is beautiful and goes great with the story.
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It is a wonderful time you get to share true love. Innocent love. Thank you for sharing this poem. The picture is beautiful and goes great with the story.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thanks Carolyn
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You you are welcome.
Comment from John Ciarmello
What a beautiful Acrostic poem! INVALUABLE. Absolutely perfect from the top of the artwork to the last word of the poem. Beauty and elegance throughout. I wish you much success with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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What a beautiful Acrostic poem! INVALUABLE. Absolutely perfect from the top of the artwork to the last word of the poem. Beauty and elegance throughout. I wish you much success with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thanks John
Comment from prettybluebirds
It appears that you have done a wonderful job with the writing prompt. Your poem sends a beautiful message to the reader too. I see this is entered in a contest so I wish you all the luck in the world.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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It appears that you have done a wonderful job with the writing prompt. Your poem sends a beautiful message to the reader too. I see this is entered in a contest so I wish you all the luck in the world.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thanks much!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Hello fellow poet a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your acrostic Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you, sir!