Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Losing Patience"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is the best of these that I have read. You followed the rules and made the story more real as the words fit without being forced into reasonable sentences. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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This is the best of these that I have read. You followed the rules and made the story more real as the words fit without being forced into reasonable sentences. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Carol, thank you very much.
Comment from LisaMay
virtual 6. I'm in awe! You've taken up the incredibly limiting challenge of all these instructions and put together a coherent, relevant and topical warning story. We should all get our boats ready. I'm glad I at least own a kayak.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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virtual 6. I'm in awe! You've taken up the incredibly limiting challenge of all these instructions and put together a coherent, relevant and topical warning story. We should all get our boats ready. I'm glad I at least own a kayak.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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LisaMAy, thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
I'm not sure there would be much conversing in Heaven, He sort of already knew what was going to happen, but beautifully written my friend, most welckme, excellent job, skilfully rendered, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I'm not sure there would be much conversing in Heaven, He sort of already knew what was going to happen, but beautifully written my friend, most welckme, excellent job, skilfully rendered, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Smiling back, for YES HE already knows and this is GOOD!
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Well done
Comment from jessizero
There's a thought! I'm impressed that you expressed all of that in such a short work. Thank you for sharing this here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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There's a thought! I'm impressed that you expressed all of that in such a short work. Thank you for sharing this here. Keep up the good work, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thanks much!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your piece. The artwork is striking and grabbed my attention immediately . You did a nice job with the very detailed prompt. I wonder if the constraints caused limitations on your writing.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed reading your piece. The artwork is striking and grabbed my attention immediately . You did a nice job with the very detailed prompt. I wonder if the constraints caused limitations on your writing.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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yes how can one be pressed to use limited words within an u limited subject I?d such vast devastation?