The right time
He waited for ...29 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Supernatural Fiction writing prompt contest.
Interesting religious story about the a father's death and an angel.
Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the Supernatural Fiction writing prompt contest.
Interesting religious story about the a father's death and an angel.
Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy, I appreciate your encouraging review and good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very nice and hopefully enlightening for someone with a dimness for what lays ahead. Peculiarly, I have written two pieces yesterday and today on such things, too but our phone line and internet were out. They are Is Pre-mortality a Reality and The Insecurity Tax. Not sure if there is a place at hand to enter them. Might have to release them through the club.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Very nice and hopefully enlightening for someone with a dimness for what lays ahead. Peculiarly, I have written two pieces yesterday and today on such things, too but our phone line and internet were out. They are Is Pre-mortality a Reality and The Insecurity Tax. Not sure if there is a place at hand to enter them. Might have to release them through the club.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Hi Tom, Thank you for reviewing, much appreciated. You can post your own writing under WRITE (Share it) on the middle blue bar if you want to. Best wishes. Wendy
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Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Wendy G day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your supernatural fiction contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Hello Wendy G day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your supernatural fiction contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for reviewing- and I appreciate your good wishes too.
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is a sad fact of life that we humans make laws to allow killing to go unpunished when we fight a battle and yet in peace time, killing is often punishable by death in some countries. How can we manipulate rules in life like this? A poignant write Wendy, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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It is a sad fact of life that we humans make laws to allow killing to go unpunished when we fight a battle and yet in peace time, killing is often punishable by death in some countries. How can we manipulate rules in life like this? A poignant write Wendy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for reviewing my story Dolly. I appreciate it. And yes, for many the guilt and trauma of killing, even in war, and for the sake of one's country, remains for a lifetime.
Wendy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your personal essay is excellent in every respect--skillfully written, smoothly flowing, and vividly descriptive of a man's visits from angels who have brought messages.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Your personal essay is excellent in every respect--skillfully written, smoothly flowing, and vividly descriptive of a man's visits from angels who have brought messages.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Janice. What a lovely and encouraging review.
Wendy
Comment from Irish Rain
Yes, it's always the right time.
Even for those gone way before their time,
God determines the right time.
I love your story, and the fact that while
he had no faith, or knowledge...he yet had
an angel.
God always finds us right where we are.
Beautiful,
blessings...
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Yes, it's always the right time.
Even for those gone way before their time,
God determines the right time.
I love your story, and the fact that while
he had no faith, or knowledge...he yet had
an angel.
God always finds us right where we are.
Beautiful,
blessings...
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you for understanding - yes He finds and meets us where we are, and this can be of great comfort to us and about those we pray for and care about. He is not limited by having to work in our hearts by "the usual ways". Lovely review.
Wendy
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Have a lovely Wednesday!!!
Comment from Judy Lawless
What a wonderful story of faith, Wendy. I'm happy for the daughter to have been able to see the transformation and feel comforted by her father's change of heart before his passing. Very well told. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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What a wonderful story of faith, Wendy. I'm happy for the daughter to have been able to see the transformation and feel comforted by her father's change of heart before his passing. Very well told. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Judy. A lovely review. Thank you also for your good wishes.
Wendy
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You?re welcome, Wendy.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this story, Wendy! You were able to weave into the gospel message and also write us a supernatural theme of an angel intervening and telling Bob about the right time to enter Heaven. Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Loved this story, Wendy! You were able to weave into the gospel message and also write us a supernatural theme of an angel intervening and telling Bob about the right time to enter Heaven. Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Helen. I always appreciate your kind and thoughtful reviews and good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I enjoyed reading. I wish this post was required reading because of the beautifully honest testimony. I can see it helping many.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I enjoyed reading. I wish this post was required reading because of the beautifully honest testimony. I can see it helping many.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you Barbara. If even one person is helped, that would be amazing. I appreciate your very encouraging review.
Wendy
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a beautiful story of redemption. God was so good to give this man a second chance, and that He accepted it as a gift and when his time finally did come, He was ready to be with the Lord. God reaches us where we are.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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What a beautiful story of redemption. God was so good to give this man a second chance, and that He accepted it as a gift and when his time finally did come, He was ready to be with the Lord. God reaches us where we are.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Anne, for such a lovely review! Much appreciated.
Wendy
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You are welcome, Wendy