Contest Entry and Winners
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Magic of Love"Short Stories
31 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Begin Again a merry Monday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your love love, love writing prompt entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Hello Begin Again a merry Monday to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your love love, love writing prompt entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much. My great-grandchildren love when we talk about the stars, heaven, and the stories I share with them. I hope it's a memory they will remember when I am gone.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful love story, motivated by your actual experiences. Love is magic. I enjoyed the way Nana had fun with the girls before they ran off to their mother. The entire story is heartwarming and realistic. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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This is a beautiful love story, motivated by your actual experiences. Love is magic. I enjoyed the way Nana had fun with the girls before they ran off to their mother. The entire story is heartwarming and realistic. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for enjoying my love story... Happy Valentine's Day and I hope you have a special day.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LisaMay
You share the magic of love beautifully, with an authentic and touching sincerity. I love the introductory humour and the scene of Nana scaring the children, before settling into explaining how love lingers forever in our hearts for a beloved.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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You share the magic of love beautifully, with an authentic and touching sincerity. I love the introductory humour and the scene of Nana scaring the children, before settling into explaining how love lingers forever in our hearts for a beloved.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for enjoying my love story... Happy Valentine's Day and I hope you have a special day.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful story and I see a lot of yourself in it, which is why it has the ring of authenticity. It is well written, and a great entry for the Love contest. Sending best wishes for your success.
Wendy
Typo: "peaked" should be "peeked"
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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A beautiful story and I see a lot of yourself in it, which is why it has the ring of authenticity. It is well written, and a great entry for the Love contest. Sending best wishes for your success.
Wendy
Typo: "peaked" should be "peeked"
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for enjoying my love story... Happy Valentine's Day and I hope you have a special day.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Here are another one of your heart-wrenching stories. You are so good at writing them. I especially enjoyed this short story as it shows wonderful insight into what love really is. Way to go girl.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Here are another one of your heart-wrenching stories. You are so good at writing them. I especially enjoyed this short story as it shows wonderful insight into what love really is. Way to go girl.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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this one is based on my darling great granddaughters and the love was already there. Just needed to put it on paper. Thanks so much!!!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a cute story. Yes, I think love is a bit magical, when you're with the right person. I like that Nana has experienced a forever love, and keeps Papa close in her heart. I also like that the girls ask if Nana is dead, and she scares them. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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This is a cute story. Yes, I think love is a bit magical, when you're with the right person. I like that Nana has experienced a forever love, and keeps Papa close in her heart. I also like that the girls ask if Nana is dead, and she scares them. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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This story is more non fiction than fiction because I do have that special love and my great granddaughters love my stories. Thanks so much.
Smiles, CArol
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Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed your story. Blessings. Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again you posted a beautiful writing prompt entry. This is a very beautiful write and I enjoyed reading. Grandma knows all about the unconditional love. Thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Once again you posted a beautiful writing prompt entry. This is a very beautiful write and I enjoyed reading. Grandma knows all about the unconditional love. Thank you.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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This one is closer to fact than fiction and I am thrilled you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Looks like Nana fulfilled her granddaughters' wish to tell a real grownup story about the real magic of love. The "cotton candy" lips scares me a little - does he use flavored chapstick?
Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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Looks like Nana fulfilled her granddaughters' wish to tell a real grownup story about the real magic of love. The "cotton candy" lips scares me a little - does he use flavored chapstick?
Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
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The cotton candy lips were added for my grandchildren's benefit. They thought I needed to say his kisses were sweet.
Thanks, Helen. Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
You have the unabashed heart of a romantic and it looks so perfect on you! I know that you've had just this very love in your own life. I am quite positive he remains in your heart and pray you also have this dance in the moonlight with his memory. I can sense your eyes twinkling!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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You have the unabashed heart of a romantic and it looks so perfect on you! I know that you've had just this very love in your own life. I am quite positive he remains in your heart and pray you also have this dance in the moonlight with his memory. I can sense your eyes twinkling!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I can imagine stepping into Nana's shoes and playing the role because I see him every night in my thoughts. He is here with me and yes, that's where the story originated.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
You are a true romantic, and folk like Nana, exist in my wife. She is like the pied piper of Hamelin to our grandchildren they adore her. What a great entry in this contest dear Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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You are a true romantic, and folk like Nana, exist in my wife. She is like the pied piper of Hamelin to our grandchildren they adore her. What a great entry in this contest dear Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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i have my great grandchildren every day and my other grandchildren too so it just seems so realistic to let them join in my stories....
Thanks so much, Roy. Appreciate the kindness.
Smiles, Carol
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That?s true Carol,