Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Pantygynt
Frighteningly difficult things these. So I offer my congratulations. When I tried one, years ago, I managed to make sense but not to make it say the same thing both ways round.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Frighteningly difficult things these. So I offer my congratulations. When I tried one, years ago, I managed to make sense but not to make it say the same thing both ways round.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you good friend, a challenge most certainly!
Comment from John Ciarmello
I loved this! I am learning so much here about the different forms of poetry. This piece is carefully written and is extremely fun to read both frontwards and backward. Beautiful! Much success with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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I loved this! I am learning so much here about the different forms of poetry. This piece is carefully written and is extremely fun to read both frontwards and backward. Beautiful! Much success with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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John, I agree FS is a perfect trainign ground to explore poetic devices and get feedback, thanks for your validation.
Comment from Thatguypk
Well done on getting this so right. This certainly isn't the easiest of styles for writing a fluent poem, but it's a very good challenge. One small error...
"Raindrops are gently falling."... should be "Raindrops are falling gently" to fit the pattern. Thanks for sharing.
PK
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Well done on getting this so right. This certainly isn't the easiest of styles for writing a fluent poem, but it's a very good challenge. One small error...
"Raindrops are gently falling."... should be "Raindrops are falling gently" to fit the pattern. Thanks for sharing.
PK
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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PK thanks man you are so right! Couldn't see the forest from the trees on that goof....
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Unnamed Poet a terrific Tuesday to you. Thanks for sharing your contest entry with us. I enjoyed your poem, good job! I was thinking of entering the contest myself but Palindromes seem a bit difficult to write. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Hello Unnamed Poet a terrific Tuesday to you. Thanks for sharing your contest entry with us. I enjoyed your poem, good job! I was thinking of entering the contest myself but Palindromes seem a bit difficult to write. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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thanks very much ...quite the challenge, this one!