Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "New Year Opportunities"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Gee
Nice entry for the 20 syllables contest.
I think this might be the first thing I have read of yours. I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing.
I hope to read more of your work.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Nice entry for the 20 syllables contest.
I think this might be the first thing I have read of yours. I enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing.
I hope to read more of your work.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Eugene, thank you for the comments.
Comment from Tina Crute
Your poem has a feeling of movement and action to it. I like the different sizes of font however I would probably reverse their sizes so that you end with the big words and the advice to love and dance and pray! That's just an opinion because I can't read the small print that well and I love the way you ended it. Overall, I think you will do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Your poem has a feeling of movement and action to it. I like the different sizes of font however I would probably reverse their sizes so that you end with the big words and the advice to love and dance and pray! That's just an opinion because I can't read the small print that well and I love the way you ended it. Overall, I think you will do well in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Tina, good input. Thanks!
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You're welcome! Anytime:)
Tina
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Wonderful twenty syllables poem. Just within a few words, you convey a great message for us on how to live this whole year. I like the words, Think mind, body,spirit, and especially the last ending of 'pray'. Wishing you all the very best in the contest, Kit.
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Wonderful twenty syllables poem. Just within a few words, you convey a great message for us on how to live this whole year. I like the words, Think mind, body,spirit, and especially the last ending of 'pray'. Wishing you all the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Kit, thank you very much!🙏🙏
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You are welcome
Comment from Judy Lawless
You have offered sound words of advice in the twenty syllable poem, JLR. As we enter into another uncertain year, we will need to keep these words in mind. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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You have offered sound words of advice in the twenty syllable poem, JLR. As we enter into another uncertain year, we will need to keep these words in mind. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Thanks Judy! 🙏🙏
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You?re welcome. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good poem for the contest entry. You get to the heart of what's important: love, dance, and pray. It's a good reminder of priorities and what matters, shows the wisdom of a young 72 year-old.
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Good poem for the contest entry. You get to the heart of what's important: love, dance, and pray. It's a good reminder of priorities and what matters, shows the wisdom of a young 72 year-old.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
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Thanks Theodore! 🎶🎶🎶👍👍
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm loving your positive words for 2022 and I wish you a Happy New Year and hope that you continue to dance and pray. It hasn't been a bad start to the year so far, let us hope everything improves for us all, love Dolly x
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I'm loving your positive words for 2022 and I wish you a Happy New Year and hope that you continue to dance and pray. It hasn't been a bad start to the year so far, let us hope everything improves for us all, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
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Dolly, glad to hear 2022 is off to a good start, thanks and have a awesome year!👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉
Comment from Pantygynt
Good to have you posting again. We don't get enough of you. With a philosophy like this you should make it in on one piece to the other side of 2022 as well.
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Good to have you posting again. We don't get enough of you. With a philosophy like this you should make it in on one piece to the other side of 2022 as well.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hi my friend! Yes, I am looking forward to a good 2022! Also, seeking to get back into my writing rhythm and being in your class, HI hope your have the highest and best that life has offer all year.
Comment from Earl Corp
This looks like it could be an inspirational poster or a Hallmark card. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
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This looks like it could be an inspirational poster or a Hallmark card. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
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Thanks Earl! 👍👍🙏🙏
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' New Year Opportunities ', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. Good luck with the contest, Please let me know how you get on?
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' New Year Opportunities ', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. Good luck with the contest, Please let me know how you get on?
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Hello Duchess, thanks for the great comments the surgery went well, I m back on the mending mode and delighted to be back with time to write again. I hope 2022 is one of the best years you have to look forward too.
Hello JLR. I'm delighted to get your message. The news about your surgery is wonderful. Now you're on my prayer list 😊😊😊 :))))
bless you,
the Duchess