Squash!
A squash ball gets it's own back15 total reviews
Comment from damommy
I can imagine to be hit by one of little balls would feel like a sledge hammer. You did a good job with personifying the squash ball. Thank you for participating, especially on such an odd challenge. lol
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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I can imagine to be hit by one of little balls would feel like a sledge hammer. You did a good job with personifying the squash ball. Thank you for participating, especially on such an odd challenge. lol
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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It was a great challenge, different and caught my eye. Aussies are great sports people. I don't like football but we are doing very well with the women's cricket. Women do it better! Blessings, K xx
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I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for telling me.
Comment from aryr
This was truly adorable, Kay. I really loved the picture. The fact that you actually wrote this as the voice of the ball was amazingly well done. I do so agree that those little balls do hurt, lol. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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This was truly adorable, Kay. I really loved the picture. The fact that you actually wrote this as the voice of the ball was amazingly well done. I do so agree that those little balls do hurt, lol. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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G'day mate! That little ball killed off some nerves in my back. Thanks for reading. Love, Kay xx
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You are most welcome, Kay.
Comment from Cat Merto
Nicely worded poem About a racquetball,
Small but deadly and they do hurt played the game a few times
Photo and color theme perfect harmony for your poem Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Nicely worded poem About a racquetball,
Small but deadly and they do hurt played the game a few times
Photo and color theme perfect harmony for your poem Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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G'day Cat, Thanks for reading. Yes, I was hit in the back and it killed off some nerves! Blessings, Kay xx
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Your welcome stay safe
Comment from tfawcus
Ouch! I, too, was a squash player in my youth. You bring back memories of those livid, circular wounds, usually on the back of the leg. Most painful! I wouldn't blame the ball but the ungentlemanly opponent who should have called for a let!
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Ouch! I, too, was a squash player in my youth. You bring back memories of those livid, circular wounds, usually on the back of the leg. Most painful! I wouldn't blame the ball but the ungentlemanly opponent who should have called for a let!
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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We can at least remember our youth! Thanks for dropping in my friend. How are you traveling? I'm down with a virus at present; lots of flu around. Take care, bless you, Kay.
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All good here, Kay. Sorry to hear you've got the dreaded lurgy. Hope you're feeling better soon. Best wishes, Tony
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Are you still in Italy?
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Never was in Italy1 LOL You must be thinking of someone else.
Buried away in sleepy old Adelaide.
Comment from LisaMay
I like how you've written this from the ball's viewpoint. It is action-packed and descriptive of the encounter. I played squash competitively until several years ago and have been hit a couple of times by people who didn't call their lets.
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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I like how you've written this from the ball's viewpoint. It is action-packed and descriptive of the encounter. I played squash competitively until several years ago and have been hit a couple of times by people who didn't call their lets.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reading Lisa. It sure does hurt when you get hit! Cheers, Kay.