Poppy and Odi's Mission
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Poppy and Odi's Mission THE END"A Cube 16 Poem Book
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Comment from robyn corum
Sandra,
Lovely! The animals have all come to their friend's aid and now his bad tooth is out. I haven't had the opportunity to read the whole piece - I'm just too, too far behind on my reviewing - but I saw something here where you were revealing the whip and thought is you were also revealing other sea creatures during the course of the story - that would be amazing!
I hope you've thought to do that? Accidentally introduce a few little know sea critters?
Anyway, congrats on ANOTHER completed book! HUZZAH!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Sandra,
Lovely! The animals have all come to their friend's aid and now his bad tooth is out. I haven't had the opportunity to read the whole piece - I'm just too, too far behind on my reviewing - but I saw something here where you were revealing the whip and thought is you were also revealing other sea creatures during the course of the story - that would be amazing!
I hope you've thought to do that? Accidentally introduce a few little know sea critters?
Anyway, congrats on ANOTHER completed book! HUZZAH!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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I have decided to put some interesting things in the back of the book for them to read, and I'm putting in a maze puzzle. I've learned a lot doing this one, it's been such a fun one. Thank you so much, Robyn. How are your grandchildren doing with the colouring in of the unicorn book?
Love and hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Well, if you remember, I had to get TWO books so that each girl had one..
Comment from Raul1
All the animals in this poem have become friends after all they have been through. A touching poetry. Excellent work! I like your poetry. No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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All the animals in this poem have become friends after all they have been through. A touching poetry. Excellent work! I like your poetry. No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem-story, Raul, and for the lovely review you've given it. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Thank you and you're welcome! You too, have a great week ahead! :)
Comment from NABattaglia
Oh that's such a fun poem, thanks for sharing this one! What a great piece and how enjoyable. I liked everything from the topic to the structure, ultimately to the progression that you took all the way to the end of the poem's storybook conclusion. Nice work and thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Oh that's such a fun poem, thanks for sharing this one! What a great piece and how enjoyable. I liked everything from the topic to the structure, ultimately to the progression that you took all the way to the end of the poem's storybook conclusion. Nice work and thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review, and the fabulous sixth star! That is so nice of you. I'm really glad you enjoyed reading my story-poem. Now the hard work begins, getting it ready for publishing! :)) Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from pookietoo
A wonderful story. You have a great imagination. Keep up the great work writing your stories. Good luck to you and best wishes always. Keep smiling.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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A wonderful story. You have a great imagination. Keep up the great work writing your stories. Good luck to you and best wishes always. Keep smiling.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thankl you so much for reading my story-poem, Pookietoo, and for the really nice review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
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You are welcome.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Hi, Sandra. What a cute little kids' poem. An appropriate story and suitable language level for quite young children. You maintain strong rhyme and especially a lovely rhythm throughout. I can see how, pieced together with the earlier sections this would make a great wee book.
I actually thought you must have had the pictures specially done - they are very cute and add an extra level of cuteness. Will you be able to use those same pics in a book which is sold to the public? I had awful trouble finding royalty free images for my latest book which will be published in the next couple of weeks. Sadly, I am no artist.
BTW did you send me a friend request on Facebook? i thought I saw an email (from facebook) about it, but I deleted it, thinking I would see the request on FB - but no. Maybe I dreamed it.
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Hi, Sandra. What a cute little kids' poem. An appropriate story and suitable language level for quite young children. You maintain strong rhyme and especially a lovely rhythm throughout. I can see how, pieced together with the earlier sections this would make a great wee book.
I actually thought you must have had the pictures specially done - they are very cute and add an extra level of cuteness. Will you be able to use those same pics in a book which is sold to the public? I had awful trouble finding royalty free images for my latest book which will be published in the next couple of weeks. Sadly, I am no artist.
BTW did you send me a friend request on Facebook? i thought I saw an email (from facebook) about it, but I deleted it, thinking I would see the request on FB - but no. Maybe I dreamed it.
Steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Hi Steve, thank you so much for this really nice review, and that golden sixth star!!
Yes, I can use them free commercially and for whatever I want to do with them. All the pictures on Pixabay.com are totally free, with no licence needed either. If you want to pay the artist a coffee, you can, but it's not obligatory. It's also free to join. Try it out, I'd be lost without their cartoon pictures, because I can't draw at all. They have all sorts of other pictures, not only childrens.
That Facebook invite, I was cloned, and so many people got in touch because they were already my 'friends' on FB. It could have been that. But, I'd like to 'friend' you if you're okay with that?
Thanks again, Steve, I'm really pleased you enjoyed this story-poem. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from tfawcus
What a delightful children's poem you have made. I imagine Scout will love it! Obviously a British whale! Love the understatement: "This pain I have
is now quite strong!" LOL
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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What a delightful children's poem you have made. I imagine Scout will love it! Obviously a British whale! Love the understatement: "This pain I have
is now quite strong!" LOL
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Tony, for this really lovely review! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this mad story, lol. Thanks also for that wonderful sixth star. Of course he's British!! LOL!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Janet Foor
A delightful children's story From beginning to the very end of the take. Children will love it and what a wonderful message as well. I enjoyed the cube form and as you said, it is great format for children's poetry.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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A delightful children's story From beginning to the very end of the take. Children will love it and what a wonderful message as well. I enjoyed the cube form and as you said, it is great format for children's poetry.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, and the sixth golden star, Janet!! I'm absolutely delighted you enjoyed my children's story. I love that Cube 16 format, I'll be using it again. Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from dellsworthpoet
Thank you for sharing all of this story. The pictures were very nice and the poetry was early childhood friendly. The story even has the feel of a moral tale.
A very good read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you for sharing all of this story. The pictures were very nice and the poetry was early childhood friendly. The story even has the feel of a moral tale.
A very good read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm delighted you enjoyed this story. Warm hugs!! :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome.
Comment from DeboraDyess
Oh! I love this! I love that it took a whole lot of them to succeed - it's a good message to send to kids. :)
You did a great job, Sandra. Kids will love this tale of whale-tooth-agony and relief. :)
Blessings,
Debs
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Oh! I love this! I love that it took a whole lot of them to succeed - it's a good message to send to kids. :)
You did a great job, Sandra. Kids will love this tale of whale-tooth-agony and relief. :)
Blessings,
Debs
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Debs. I'm glad you picked up on the moral, and that you enjoyed my little story. :)) I'm going to have a little break from writing stories for a couple of weeks or so, perhaps I'll write a bit of poetry. I'll be reviewing and coming in to let you all know I'm still alive and kicking, though!! I've still got to sort out Betrayal and get that published, too. I'm such a glutton for punishment, but I do enjoy it!! LOL. Thanks for all your support my wonderful friend. I'm going to look at those other sites now. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from SHABAMO
This is definitely a wonderful children's poem and I enjoyed reading it! If you have not published it into a small children's book, you should consider it.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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This is definitely a wonderful children's poem and I enjoyed reading it! If you have not published it into a small children's book, you should consider it.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2021
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Thank you, Shabamo, for this lovely review. I'm delighted you enjoyed reading it. I will be publishing it as soon as I can. Thanks again! :)) Sandra xxx