Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I love the pink flower. It is so beautiful. Life should be beautify. People can make it beautiful like the six words chosen by you;

"disregard your imperfections and nurture perfection"

What a piece of good advice!

Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you for your excellent comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello kahpot!
Inspirational!
What a wonderful philosophy to share and live!
I surely have many imperfections, but I attempt to "nurture" the gifts I've been given!

Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you very much, yes our good points/parts are what we should concentrate on, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Mark D. R.

Exceptional

A vision in purpleness! Great imagery in artwork in combo with your few words poem. Looking at oneself in a mirror, one often glimpses some imperfections. Others see the beauty. We should listen more to our friends.

Mark

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Yes our friends even those who do or have loved us must see something there, thank you for your exceptional review and six stars, very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Wonderful idea with using these six words, Kahpot. Lots of good solid advice in there. I think you will do very well in the contest, my friend. Have a good week ahead. Bob

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you Bob, as always very much appreciated-just to let you know I am reading your earlier stories though not commenting on all, mainly learning and catching up, I am trying to write another short story-and find myself going back and fourth while reading yours-maybe I am going about it all wrong, but it is fun trying****kahpot

reply by Mastery on 14-Mar-2021

I'll be glad to help you in anyway I can, my friend. Meanwhile remember these three ver imprtant rules I go by that will never fail you on your path to good writing..Always always employ them if nothing else, kahpot.

l. SHOW your story, do not TELL it.

2. Engage good natural-sounding dialogue all the time. dialogue moves a story forward and holds attention.

3. VERBS ARE KING Use them often and especially in describing persons, places and things.

And 4. When yu are done, take it off into a quiet room someplace and read it OUT LOUD. You will be surprised how much you find, my friend. :) Bob

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Wow! thank you very much, now I know what to look for when reading-I know what I like and these especially verbs are king might point out why, again many thanks****kahpot

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Kahpot,

I really like the title you have chosen which sets up the theme in your
6 word entry so well. Your presentation is very stunning. I like the
positive message within your poem and the contrast between the
two lines is merged very well...step one and step two. A good reminder
for folks like me.

Best wishes in the contest,
Anna

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you Anna, though different form I thought short forms will help me understand the meaning and placement of words a bit better, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by AnnaLinda on 14-Mar-2021

You are welcome.
I see it was popular.

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

OK. This is definitely a winner. I love the sentiments that is so inspiring - expressed in just six words. And the artwork is perfect. You've mastered the shorter formats very well lately. Keep on posting! Always look forward to reading your works.

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you very much, your comments are so encouraging, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This 6 word poetry contest entry speaks a lesson for good living that we should disregard our imperfections and cherish to practice our perfection in performance; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you for you wonderful comments, very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We are all good at something in life and we should concentrate on those things we excel at, no one is perfect, but we can strive to be our best, wonderful art and words tell a tale here, love Dolly x

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Yes we are, thank you for these encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

What a wonderful advice and word of wisdom: "disregard your imperfections

and nurture perfection". Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you for your wonderful comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You made great use of the title and the well chosen six words to create wise advice. We can't do anything about gifts we don't have but we can nurture the ones that God gave us. Hope you do well in the contest!

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

Thank you for your very encouraging comments, yes we should improve what we do and like best, very much appreciated****kahpot