Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It is far easier to tell the true tale,than to ad-lib. It's hard to keep tracks of the non-truths. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013

Thank you very much.

reply by c_lucas on 19-Oct-2013

You're welcome.

Comment from adewpearl

Average

Wise is known by his act - not correct English language syntax
A true wise tells - do you mean wise person, person of wisdom?
A true wise tells...that sentence needs lots of work
all those anybodies and anythings get confusing
An unwise tells - unwise man/person?
As always, I can tell you have something to say, Al, but it is virtually impossible to tell what that something is because of your problems writing a properly composed sentence. Brooke

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013

Thank you. I have changed words and edited it.