Comment from Crystal Carey

Exceptional

Great job, I do think you need to edit through it a bit more,
This one for instance ; I sailed the blue seas and I do as I please
And for a sign you sure have some gall: sailed should be sail or do should be did. Little things like otherwise I think it's great (hence the six :))

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Thanks again

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

I like the moral to your story Eric and find it to be very helpful to a child. Amazing details are a part of this tale and a very good write of quatrains.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

thanks Gungalo

reply by Gungalo on 07-Dec-2012

Smile.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

Adorable! I loved it. So might Disney. Could be the beginning of a lovely poem with a lot future. Good rhyme and easy flow between stanzas. Robin Gilmor

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Thanks much Robin

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

This is a cute little poem. I think stopping at the stop sign is a good idea, at least until you see the way is clear, and maybe that's what the viking should do. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Alright thanks

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

"Stop Teasing Our Policemen.", "Stop, Take Off Pants." "Skip The Onions, Please." This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Thanks much Lucas

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

This was a great little poem for children of all ages. Your carefully chosen words just flowed down the page and kept my interest to the end. Nice conclusion. Very nicely done.
Best wishes,
Janet

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Thanks much Janet

Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

Love it!! Dont let anything get in your way,know matter how big or scary it is you can handle it come what may,,,, The flow is good I like the colors. Nicely done...

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Thanks Much Deorre

Comment from squid152

Excellent

I used to fish in the day and sing at night when I lived at Catalina Island. You are very consistent on these children's poems.-Gary

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Are you a Viking?..Thanks for the good review..

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

After examining your text with a microscope, I was able to ascertain that it is a poem about a Viking named Eric.

There once was a little Viking named Eric
One night the viking he was a-singing [ capitalize Viking for consistency ]

The kids should enjoy this poem immensely.

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Thanks for the edit Donald..

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

A nicely built set of verses, eric. It reminds me of the commercials being used lately to relay the 'What's in your wallet' campaign.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012

Capita One..I still owe them about 4 Grand..LOL