Reign Knee Daze (Rainy Days)
A poem, just for the hell of it...127 total reviews
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Wow!!! Hi Dean. Whatever you're taking, please pass some of those to me...heh heh! Your writing was rhythmtically cryptic and I felt like I was on a roller coaster. The images you posted really felt like I was in a haunted house too. I have to say I liked the pastor running home to look at porn..heh heh! With people, you just never know who are really righteous. Again Dean, I couldn't detect any SPAG or grammar. The formatting was very detailed and again, nice background. Your poem ending with a veil sent me chills. Take care and good luck...Don't worry. Keep having bad dreams! Cheers!
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Wow!!! Hi Dean. Whatever you're taking, please pass some of those to me...heh heh! Your writing was rhythmtically cryptic and I felt like I was on a roller coaster. The images you posted really felt like I was in a haunted house too. I have to say I liked the pastor running home to look at porn..heh heh! With people, you just never know who are really righteous. Again Dean, I couldn't detect any SPAG or grammar. The formatting was very detailed and again, nice background. Your poem ending with a veil sent me chills. Take care and good luck...Don't worry. Keep having bad dreams! Cheers!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Dean
When will I ever learn to read your work in the daylight not in the middle of the dark, dark night. Your long poems always seem so short. LOL Thank heavens this one took a turn to the light side .... I feel I can breath now.
Fantastic presentation as per. :))) I hate reviewing some of your work ... there is so much to say about your perfect meter and rhyme, that huge talent which is used purely to scare ME TO DEATH! .... or is it just me??? Yadda yadda of your exceptional poetic skill, the amazing artistry of your presentation ... phew.... and more and all the rest.
I want to just keep screaming and screaming ... and then run down the back and put my head in the horse trough... but it's DARK out there!!!
Love your work talented poet, but it sure is overpowering ... I feel I need go straight to my coffin and have nightmares until daybreak.
Just love the title. Clever, clever. Hugs - Lovi xoxox
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Hi Dean
When will I ever learn to read your work in the daylight not in the middle of the dark, dark night. Your long poems always seem so short. LOL Thank heavens this one took a turn to the light side .... I feel I can breath now.
Fantastic presentation as per. :))) I hate reviewing some of your work ... there is so much to say about your perfect meter and rhyme, that huge talent which is used purely to scare ME TO DEATH! .... or is it just me??? Yadda yadda of your exceptional poetic skill, the amazing artistry of your presentation ... phew.... and more and all the rest.
I want to just keep screaming and screaming ... and then run down the back and put my head in the horse trough... but it's DARK out there!!!
Love your work talented poet, but it sure is overpowering ... I feel I need go straight to my coffin and have nightmares until daybreak.
Just love the title. Clever, clever. Hugs - Lovi xoxox
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Andrewajgblue
A brilliant tale of morbid horror, I thoroughtly enjoyed the tale of Terror, a brilliant rhyme all the way through with some great phrasing and alliteration, excellent work,
Andrew
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A brilliant tale of morbid horror, I thoroughtly enjoyed the tale of Terror, a brilliant rhyme all the way through with some great phrasing and alliteration, excellent work,
Andrew
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from jim lawler
This is a masterpiece Dean! I love it. Where do you come up with these great stories? It reads like a winner! The graphics are terrific. I didn't see any typos and it needs no revision. Good luck with it. Jim
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This is a masterpiece Dean! I love it. Where do you come up with these great stories? It reads like a winner! The graphics are terrific. I didn't see any typos and it needs no revision. Good luck with it. Jim
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Adri7enne
For those who believe in hell and the devil, it must be scary, Dean. Loved your demon pictures. Cool with the cigarette. LOL!
Great rhyming and lots of original images. Fun stuff. I admit I muted the music. I find it impossible to concentrate on both the poetry and the music. Nice writing, though.
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For those who believe in hell and the devil, it must be scary, Dean. Loved your demon pictures. Cool with the cigarette. LOL!
Great rhyming and lots of original images. Fun stuff. I admit I muted the music. I find it impossible to concentrate on both the poetry and the music. Nice writing, though.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from LIJ Red
just reviewed a poem of walking in the rain in pain in a strain and against the grain, now you want it to pour and wash away your sins. perspectives. Excellent.
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just reviewed a poem of walking in the rain in pain in a strain and against the grain, now you want it to pour and wash away your sins. perspectives. Excellent.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Amsterdam
You can have all earth
Safe in your portfolio
You won't have to search
You won't have to go
Give me my birth
Build me an alter
Age of Aquarius
I'll drown every man's daughter
Looking out to the shadowey abyss
No thank you ... Bub
Hope I enlist
Where is the love?
am
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You can have all earth
Safe in your portfolio
You won't have to search
You won't have to go
Give me my birth
Build me an alter
Age of Aquarius
I'll drown every man's daughter
Looking out to the shadowey abyss
No thank you ... Bub
Hope I enlist
Where is the love?
am
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from livelylinda
Dean: hmmmmmm, what to say. The sound of the rain is pleasant, the devil taking over ones life is not. Yes, that nasty boy haunts us and we must beware. This is a joy to read with a serious side and fun pictures! You've done it again, and better. Linda
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Dean: hmmmmmm, what to say. The sound of the rain is pleasant, the devil taking over ones life is not. Yes, that nasty boy haunts us and we must beware. This is a joy to read with a serious side and fun pictures! You've done it again, and better. Linda
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Wendyanne
Wow what a nightmarish scene you have described so vividly (shiver) and the added animations made this a very scary read. Fantastic imagery, alliteration and enjambment Dean. You are an excellent writer!
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Wow what a nightmarish scene you have described so vividly (shiver) and the added animations made this a very scary read. Fantastic imagery, alliteration and enjambment Dean. You are an excellent writer!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from write hand blue
A poem inspired by a dream and well illustrated by your animated pictures and sound effects.
I don't know about God's rain, but then it was just a dream.
Original and most eloquently composed, with a good image, frightening in fact. Gripping nightmare producing stuff. I can breathe out now.LOL. best wishes :) mel.
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A poem inspired by a dream and well illustrated by your animated pictures and sound effects.
I don't know about God's rain, but then it was just a dream.
Original and most eloquently composed, with a good image, frightening in fact. Gripping nightmare producing stuff. I can breathe out now.LOL. best wishes :) mel.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014