Crash
Not a productive response to a hurtful event2 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
A great responsive poem to the Love's Betrayal prompt. This verse could easily have happened and its a shame the guy was moved to tears by this unfaithful hussy. She does not deserve his regard. Great write.
Melissa
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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A great responsive poem to the Love's Betrayal prompt. This verse could easily have happened and its a shame the guy was moved to tears by this unfaithful hussy. She does not deserve his regard. Great write.
Melissa
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Could not agree with you more. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from Alex Rosel
The "Long, lingering kiss" says it all. Especially the strong adjective "lingering".
I also particularly like the last two lines:
Cannot tear the page
From my memory book
To refer to the mind as a "memory book" is something I've never seen before, but it's a neat description.
Best of luck with the competition {smiles}.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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The "Long, lingering kiss" says it all. Especially the strong adjective "lingering".
I also particularly like the last two lines:
Cannot tear the page
From my memory book
To refer to the mind as a "memory book" is something I've never seen before, but it's a neat description.
Best of luck with the competition {smiles}.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much for your encouraging words.