Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

Love the presentation of this, the artwork, font colours and background are just perfectly chosen. The words are outstanding too. A strong entry I would say. There's one small problem, the same one I had til someone pointed it out. LOL

The first line and last line have to be the same word. I missed it too. Plenty of time and an easy fix. Good luck in the contest. This looks like a great entry. ;)) mike

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018

Hey thank you for the read and the correction. I have edited. Your input is much appreciated.

Comment from Dawnya

Excellent

The conditions of the contest require that your last line is a repeat of the first line. You should have time to correct this. I absolutely love the idea of fall leaves being mosaics painted by some impish person. Good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018

Thanks for the tip, I have corrected. Your input much appreciated.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Autumn has such wonderful golden colour to offer us and I loved the word 'mosaics' which is so apt, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018

Thanks for the read and the comments. I made a mistake the first and last line had to be the same. I have corrected an the word joy is not the first and last lines.

Comment from Therese103

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 7-1-7 poetry competition, but the first and last words have to be the same. I'd be happy to come back and upgrade my rating if you fix that one little detail:-) Love your picture, by the way, and ''autumn mosaics'' is stunning. Blessings, Therese

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018

Thanks for giving me an opportunity to correct. Much appreciated.
Joy
Autumn mosaics by Jack
Joy