Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Congratulations on winning the contest of the 3-5-3 poem. It is very well-written and worthy of the 1st place. Just a tiny puff can carry little seeds to a place where they can start to grow.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for the uplifting feedback and support.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

An original and unique choice of the air prompt in this 3-5-3. A puff of an idea/breath can set us on our course. Nicely illustrated in this interesting concept for you poem. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for the uplifting feedback and support.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

WONDERFUL!

Super closing line...implying so much more than the few words of the poems can do on thier own...perfect brevity. Nice presentation too, augmenting interpretation avenues!

Superb consonance of F and S and alliteration of S as well.

Bravo

warmly, rd

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for the uplifting feedback and support.

reply by rama devi on 26-Aug-2016

:-))))) My pleasure

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

This is a nicely written 3-5-3 poem with
a nice theme about pollination. The picture
displays the poem perfectly. Good luck
with the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you very much for your kind and generous feedback. It is greatly valued and appreciated.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

This was a really sweet and picturesque little gem that was a great thought for the prompt. Great picture too-best of luck with the voting.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for such kind and encouraging feedback. It is truly appreciated.

Comment from EricBrady

Excellent

Wonderful depiction of some childhood fun. Lots of stories in those few words. I do believe that you have met all of the contest requirements, so this should be a contender. Beautiful artwork to go with it. I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for such kind and encouraging feedback. It is truly appreciated.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your fine poem. Yes, it brings back some fond memories of when I was a child, picking those puffs and blowing them in the breeze. Great job, and good luck. :-)

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for such kind and encouraging feedback. It is truly appreciated.

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh, this is so romantic! I absolutely LOVE it! What a creative imagination to put these words together! I sincerely hope this wins - it's got some stiff competition from what I've read so far, but this is beautiful!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for such kind and encouraging feedback. It is truly appreciated.

reply by Dawn Munro on 02-Aug-2016

My pleasure!

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Creative thoughts, writer view a mere blow can multiply into abundance for many. Heart warming thoughts able to touch the inner conscious.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for such kind and encouraging feedback. It is truly appreciated.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

A once beloved member here by the name of Brooke Baldwin (adewpearl) would have adored the theme of this 3-5-3 contest entry.
She did love her dandelions so.
I especially liked the last line, "seed of dreams." Nice metaphor.
Best of luck in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2016

Thank you very much. Brooke was the inspiration as it has been far too long since the dandelion was paid proper homage here :).