Comment from jules4jesus

Excellent

yes please what a lovely picture to compliment such lovely words that made me feel so alive i wish we have a bubbling river where we are but i am lucky enough to have the sea love the word refreshing it conjurs up many happy thoughts so my friend good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is cleverly written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with the stream and your artwork choice is excellent. It goes very well with your poem.

Angel123

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2015

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Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Your 3-5-3 water poem has great imagery and great 'r' alliteration. Your syllable count is perfect. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a refreshing poem about water over the rocks. Form and syllable count are correct, and the illustration is nice. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015

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