Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Carolyn, I love the meaning behind this poem...we need to used the natural energies God has given us...out world would be so much cleaner...so very well thought of...and very well written...love ya girl...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Hi dear Linda,
Sorry I am so far behind. I appreciate your comments regarding the use of natural energies. How true. Glad you enjoyed this one.
Love you toooooooooooooooo,
Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 03-Jun-2015

Hi Carolyn, I am just catching up now...you are always so very welcome sweet girl...always...Linda ...Love ya xxoo

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This reminds me of the famous comment by an American humourist, whose name, I am ashamed to say, slips my mind: that it was obvious what caused the wind -- it's all those trees waving their branches about! No I don't think you have enough trees in Oklahoma, so I suppose you have to make do with turbines for wind!

 Comment Written 02-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for your enjoyable review. I've been ill so very far behind, but I appreciate your comments so much.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Pantygynt on 02-Jun-2015

Sorry to hear of your illness and hoping you are well on the way to recovery

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

Eyes can glimpse
but the mind can't fathom
The total awesomeness of our God

Just when we think we've got Him figured out, He gives us another glimpse...

Well done with this one, Buck

 Comment Written 02-May-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks Trybuck,
I appreciate your fine comments.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your presentation is great. The colors remind me of wind and dirt blowing like I know it does in OK.

The topic is good--one that is not usually written about in a poem. Turbines do provide energy, but God makes the wind.

Good job. No changes. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Hi jannypan,
I'm sorry to be so late in my reply's. I really enjoyed what you said.... Turbines provide the energy but God makes the wind.
How very true.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

A salute to man's ingenuity and God who is ultimately responsible.
turbines / Stirring the night air --great verb choice.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Hi there,
And thanks for the great review.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Carolyn. From time to time one of these little forms jumps off the screen at me and just say a whole big story in a few lines which would take me a heck of a lot more lines to write. That picture is great as well mate, good work, I love this piece. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks Fez, I'm sorry for the delayed reply's. I appreciate your fine comments.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem.
It is a perfect match. As I looked at the art something magical went in my mind, yet I knew not what it meant.
Until I read the authors note. Than it made sense.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Hi there Cookie and thanks for the sweet comments. Glad you liked this one. The wind turbines are amazing.
Love, Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 08-Jun-2015

You're very welcome, have a nice day.
Cookie

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Wow! Ten thousand turbines must require a lot of maintenance. At least that creates jobs. I thought your poem was a lovely way of making a mechanical thing have a pleasing outcome in the face of nature.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thanks Nicole,
Your part of the planet has those too, I assume. Oklahoma has so many. We call them turbine ranches.'
I appreciate your fine remarks.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Carolyn,

This is another wonderfully written free verse poem with a great picture to go with it. I also like the scripture you put with it too. You are such a wonderful poet and I just love to read your work.

Kat

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thanks Kat,
I am trying to give my 'get up an go a boost'. :-) So glad you liked this one.
How's your headache today?
Your friend, Carolyn

reply by MizKat on 30-Apr-2015

Don't know if I answered this before or not. My memory doesn't remember. I have headaches every day without fail. They're so good to me. LOL

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn;
+ this piece of poetry is mostly your nearly written as a tanka or a Japanese form and style of the same type. I commend you on it very well written piece of poetry,
+ good use of enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concepts in one stanza and line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Also, good use of juxtaposition technique of association and similarity were used two distinct images within one poem. The two images in this poem are in the lines: "Stirring the night air" and "Wonders of the wind".
+ The pictures very conducive, relative and complements the poem. A great silhouette of a picture.
+ Near and notable alliteration's: /"ten thousand turbines"/"Wonders of the wind"/
+ thank you for sharing and posting this wonderful piece of poetry with imagery is very definitively descriptive and vividly expressive. May the good Lord be with you always also.
Alex

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2015

Thank you dear Alex for your through, complimentary and affirming comments.
I appreciate your taking the time and effort to write such a wonderful review.
:-) Carolyn