The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 89 "Visit to the Rain forest"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
9 total reviews
Comment from Judy Couch
I like the descriptions of the things seen. I like its rhyme. I love the way it ends with recognition that these things may not be here much longer.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
I like the descriptions of the things seen. I like its rhyme. I love the way it ends with recognition that these things may not be here much longer.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Thanks Judy for your comments. So glad you enjoyed the visit.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Great descriptions of the rain forest life. I like the endangered aspect you included. I see nothing to change. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
Great descriptions of the rain forest life. I like the endangered aspect you included. I see nothing to change. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Thanks jannypan,
so glad you enjoyed this one.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from RYME4U
Nicely done. This rhymes well and has smooth rhythm. The descriptions of the rainforest animals are excellent. This is nicely presented. I love the Kinkajou picture
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
Nicely done. This rhymes well and has smooth rhythm. The descriptions of the rainforest animals are excellent. This is nicely presented. I love the Kinkajou picture
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Thanks so much for your great review. I have never seen a live Kinkajou, but I think he is a cute little guy.
:-) Carolyn
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They are cute. They live in Australia. Never saw a real one either.You're welcome!
Comment from Ben Colder
I liked this one much. No doubt a winner in my book. Never had a six to award you so I will vote for instead. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
I liked this one much. No doubt a winner in my book. Never had a six to award you so I will vote for instead. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Thanks Ben,
I will cherish the virtual six. The 'committee' dis-qualified the poem because I didn't mention being lost. LOL.. I guess I need to read the rules better.
So glad you enjoyed this one, it was fun to research and write.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from fimarie78
I really enjoyed this poem. It had a nice quirky style and rhythm. You described a vast array of animals very well. You had obviously done your research. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
I really enjoyed this poem. It had a nice quirky style and rhythm. You described a vast array of animals very well. You had obviously done your research. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2015
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Thanks for stopping by and yes the research was fun. So glad you enjoyed the poem.. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a delightful piece strong in imagery and natural flow throughout. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a delightful piece strong in imagery and natural flow throughout. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Thanks for the great review. So glad you enjoyed the visit.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from juliebookly
Hmmmm. This poem is nice. The rhythm and flow is very liquid. I like the poem. The use of imagery is also very strong. Well done and keep up the good work
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
Hmmmm. This poem is nice. The rhythm and flow is very liquid. I like the poem. The use of imagery is also very strong. Well done and keep up the good work
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Thanks juliebookly,
I am delighted you enjoyed this one and appreciate your comments and fine rating. :-) Carolyn
Comment from robina1978
Gorgeous photo that complements your poem very well. I assume you did research on which animals live in the rain forest. First about the animals and at the end: endangered rain forest. It rhymes and flows all the way. Best wishes for the prompt.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
Gorgeous photo that complements your poem very well. I assume you did research on which animals live in the rain forest. First about the animals and at the end: endangered rain forest. It rhymes and flows all the way. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2015
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Thanks robina,
yes I did research on the internet. It was fun to do and then write the poem. So glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn
Comment from alf collier
Hi to the unknown author. A very worthy contender for the rainforest prompt, I think. Your descriptions of animals lead me to believe your rainforest is somewhere in Asia? not sure. Anyway, loved the poem, alf
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
Hi to the unknown author. A very worthy contender for the rainforest prompt, I think. Your descriptions of animals lead me to believe your rainforest is somewhere in Asia? not sure. Anyway, loved the poem, alf
Comment Written 12-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2015
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Thanks Alf.. my rainforest is on the internet.. LOL.. So glad you enjoyed this , it was such fun to imagine and write. :-)