Comment from Erik McGinley

Excellent

Lol, you know that the best aphrodisiac is fresh air don't you? Preferrably by the sea or a lake ;)

Oh! And don't ask him for permission to seduce him. Just do it. Eye contact is vital! (Lol both truth and innuendo :P)

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

Hi Erik :) Thanks for your amusing feedback, I will take your advice on board re asking for permission! It's true about fresh air... just need to organise a picnic by the sea without the kids!
Debs x

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Short but sweet poem. Very romantic. Love the picture and the writing works well together. Best wishes in the contest. You must be busy with little ones at this time of year. Great job!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Hi Drew :) Always busy with 3 little ones! Especially now though in the school holidays with their little friends playing round here too I seem to be refereeing and catering non-stop! Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes... I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, debra, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the romance that needs to be maintained in equal parts. I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you so much sweetwoodjax for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

Well written, short and to the point. Great use of the song title, and love your sense of humor in it. Best wishes in the voting booth!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you Karen :) I appreciate the good luck wishes and nice comments! Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Your poem follows the prompt well and the picture compliments it well. I was amuzed at the build up. The rhyme and rhythm are great.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you Judy for your great feedback :) Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

A very cute and seductive poem. One a husband or boyfriend would love to receive in a note in his lunch pail, or text on his phone.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Hi Seaglass :) That's a great idea - I will do that... give him something to look forward to eh?!
Thank you for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

well bit awkward im not sure what my wife would say ..... oh not me.... awkward again lol well mrs white very naughty great write lol xxgazzaxx

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

LOL! Thanks Gazza for your fun feedback :) Debs x

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very well done. I like the teasing tone and the well chosen words. The seduction theme is excellent and the rhythm and rhyme are great, Good job!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you Ryme4U for your great feedback :) Kindest regards as always, Debra

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I had to smile as I read this poem, Oh how those nights t entered my mind.( smile)
I thought this was a very delightful poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Thank you Cookie for your lovely feedback :) Kindest regards as always, Debra x

reply by misscookie on 24-Aug-2014

You're very welcome. Until next time
Cookie

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Thank you for sponsoring this fun and exciting contest, Debra. I enjoyed your poem and the message is one any married couple can relate to. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Indy :-)

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Hi Indy :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)