Maybe
a 1-9-18 total reviews
Comment from trimple
Hi Bill
To be or not to be, maybe :)
Great use of words that have the repeats stand out and express your thoughts
kind regards
tracey :)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Hi Bill
To be or not to be, maybe :)
Great use of words that have the repeats stand out and express your thoughts
kind regards
tracey :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Tracey, for the kind review.
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you're welcome:)
Comment from lakeport
Maybe, indeed to be or not to be, that's a very nice expressed 1/9/1 poem, Good luck at the contest.God bless you.lakeport.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Maybe, indeed to be or not to be, that's a very nice expressed 1/9/1 poem, Good luck at the contest.God bless you.lakeport.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thank you.
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your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you follow the contest prompt
your few words allow the reader to see no maybe's let it be yes or no
good visual
cheers smoothiecool
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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good luck in the contest
you follow the contest prompt
your few words allow the reader to see no maybe's let it be yes or no
good visual
cheers smoothiecool
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Smoothiecool, for the excellent review.
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most welcome..SC
Comment from LoannaLois
What a smart and ingenious way to write your theme in this 1-9-1. The chosen words were perfect to repeat to make your point.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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What a smart and ingenious way to write your theme in this 1-9-1. The chosen words were perfect to repeat to make your point.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thank you, LL, for the excellent review.
Comment from acerisestory
Well done, poet! Very clever. I would not have thought of this in a thousand years. The repetition of "no" makes for a good impact.
Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest. Alana
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Well done, poet! Very clever. I would not have thought of this in a thousand years. The repetition of "no" makes for a good impact.
Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest. Alana
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Alana, for the excellent review.
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You are welcome! Alana
Comment from Trybuck
A definite answer is always the best but sometimes maybe is the only one we can give until more information comes in.. Well done with your entry, Buck
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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A definite answer is always the best but sometimes maybe is the only one we can give until more information comes in.. Well done with your entry, Buck
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Buck, for the excellent review.
Comment from adewpearl
You have the correct 1/9/1 syllable count for this contest
good play on words with maybe broken down into its two component words
good alliteration in your yes
Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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You have the correct 1/9/1 syllable count for this contest
good play on words with maybe broken down into its two component words
good alliteration in your yes
Brooke
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Brooke, for the excellent review.
Comment from Jay Squires
This is the third 1-9-1 poem. Yours seems to be speaking in praise of constancy. I remember Henry Miller's similar words, "If you stand, stand, if you sit, sit ... but don't wobble.
Yours said it in a lot less words.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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This is the third 1-9-1 poem. Yours seems to be speaking in praise of constancy. I remember Henry Miller's similar words, "If you stand, stand, if you sit, sit ... but don't wobble.
Yours said it in a lot less words.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Jay, for the excellent review.