Haunted Cottage
Errie............4 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. I have been in some so-called haunted houses. I don't know if they were really haunted, but they were spooky. Some houses are like that. I have this is more true if bad things happened in the house. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I have been in some so-called haunted houses. I don't know if they were really haunted, but they were spooky. Some houses are like that. I have this is more true if bad things happened in the house. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional
comments. So glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from c_lucas
As a general rule, ghost, unlike demons, are seldom violent. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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As a general rule, ghost, unlike demons, are seldom violent. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent review and you great comments. So glad you enjoyed the poem.
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You're welcome,
Comment from costellsgirl33
Oh, I love that picture! Reminds me of a halloween decoration from when I was in school! I love it. This is a great entry for the short poem-ghosts writing prompt. It's like scary and funny all at the same time, mixed in with cut!
Great job and good luck
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Oh, I love that picture! Reminds me of a halloween decoration from when I was in school! I love it. This is a great entry for the short poem-ghosts writing prompt. It's like scary and funny all at the same time, mixed in with cut!
Great job and good luck
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and your exceptional
comments. So glad you enjoyed the poem!
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You are more than welcome!
Arnetta
Comment from Eric1
Hi author, a really good poem for this ghostly competition, you have however mispelt eerie as errie, and if you change the line, 'fearful might they' to fearful they might' it will be fine. Good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Hi author, a really good poem for this ghostly competition, you have however mispelt eerie as errie, and if you change the line, 'fearful might they' to fearful they might' it will be fine. Good luck!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for your excellent review and your exceptional
comments. I especially thank you for catching the spelling and grammar error - corrected! Have a great night!
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you are so welcome my friend.