The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "He will never change"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
17 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Ho Carolyn
How are you and the family.
We are the ones who change. He knows the beginning, the middle and the end. We know none of these.so we change and shift.
This writing say a lot , a great lot.
Very well penned.
Benny
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Ho Carolyn
How are you and the family.
We are the ones who change. He knows the beginning, the middle and the end. We know none of these.so we change and shift.
This writing say a lot , a great lot.
Very well penned.
Benny
Comment Written 19-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2014
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Hi Benny, we are doing fairly well and hope you, your sister-in-law and all are also. Thank you for your insightful review. Yes, our Maker knows us. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Petriesan
Nice depiction of a common theological concept, of a way we understand the divine.
Well put, with well-chosen words.
the picture, too, is cool
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Nice depiction of a common theological concept, of a way we understand the divine.
Well put, with well-chosen words.
the picture, too, is cool
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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And so are you, cool that is. Thank you so much, :-) Carolyn
Comment from The Death
Hi,
I love the thought you present here. He surely remains constant during all the times.
I have a little concern regarding the artwork for one may not visualize moon as constant, but moving and changing shape. So, it distracts a bit from the theme.
I like the N consonance in the last line. Lovely presentation too. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Hi,
I love the thought you present here. He surely remains constant during all the times.
I have a little concern regarding the artwork for one may not visualize moon as constant, but moving and changing shape. So, it distracts a bit from the theme.
I like the N consonance in the last line. Lovely presentation too. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks for the wonderful comments, Anupam. My thinking on the 'Moon,' since He created it, and hung it, as it were, is that it is constant in its nocturnal appearance and activity for all the world to see. No matter where we are located. It is awesome that you think beyond words. :-) Carolyn
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose for your poem.
It is a perfect match and truly sets the mood.
Your words are so on point. we should count our blessing God doesn't change.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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I like the artwork you choose for your poem.
It is a perfect match and truly sets the mood.
Your words are so on point. we should count our blessing God doesn't change.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting poem.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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misscookie, I am happy you liked this simple poem. Thanks for the great review. Love, Carolyn
you're very welcome, until next time.
Comment from GracieAnn
Carolyn, this is a solid 5-7-5 with perfect line and syllable count. It carries a strong message and gives a double meaning with the constancy of the moon and the dependability of God. Nice juxtaposition of the two. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Carolyn, this is a solid 5-7-5 with perfect line and syllable count. It carries a strong message and gives a double meaning with the constancy of the moon and the dependability of God. Nice juxtaposition of the two. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks GracieAnn for the wonderful comments and affirmation of correctness. That means as much to me as SPAG edits, both are needed and appreciated. :-) Carolyn
Comment from country ranch writer
God accepts us for who we are, not what others think we should be or act. He forgives us and hold us close to his heart to watch over all of us in the universe
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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God accepts us for who we are, not what others think we should be or act. He forgives us and hold us close to his heart to watch over all of us in the universe
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Wonderful and insightful remarks. Thank you. I'm, glad you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn, you couldn't have chosen a better words than what you have written here today. The simplicity of these words are the complexities of His genius and love. Thanks for posting and sharing and may you always find peace wherever you are.
Alex
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Carolyn, you couldn't have chosen a better words than what you have written here today. The simplicity of these words are the complexities of His genius and love. Thanks for posting and sharing and may you always find peace wherever you are.
Alex
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Thank you dear Alex for this wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed 'He will never change.' :-) Carolyn
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Carolyn, you are sincerely welcome.
Alex
Comment from Sylvia Page
He will never change ... Yes He is always constant He will never leave us. He will follow us when we drift away and bring us back, that's for certain, He will.
Sylvia
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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He will never change ... Yes He is always constant He will never leave us. He will follow us when we drift away and bring us back, that's for certain, He will.
Sylvia
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Yes, He will. Smile, thank you Sylvia. Love, Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
yes, Carolyn. He is the one constant we can always count on. This is very true and I love the picture. God's full moon. so beautiful. Nice. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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yes, Carolyn. He is the one constant we can always count on. This is very true and I love the picture. God's full moon. so beautiful. Nice. Miss Sally
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Hi there again, I am happy you enjoyed this one Miss Sally. Thank God for His abiding love. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Gungalo
He will never change
We may drift away from Him
He remains constant
And thank goodness He does, eh Carolyn? Beautiful 5/7/5 for this praise to our Lord.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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He will never change
We may drift away from Him
He remains constant
And thank goodness He does, eh Carolyn? Beautiful 5/7/5 for this praise to our Lord.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Thank you Pam for this insightful and sweet review. :-) Carolyn
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Smile.