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Rebellious Cub

Wanting independence too soon

11 total reviews 
Comment from ennahanid
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This certainly put a satisfied smile on my face this morning...just such a great picture to highlight your 5-7-5...it just all comes together so well and I wish you luck in
the contest - Dinah

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
    thank you.
Comment from adewpearl
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Terrific pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 format
I love the humor in the lion parent's question to this independent cub LOL Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
    Thank you Brooke. I'm glad it made you laugh.
Comment from jmdg1954
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I'm laughing my tail off right now. I just read an entry that I was sure was a winner, now I read yours. This is going to be a tough vote.

Cody, you come here
we know you asked for some space
but to hunt alone?

Nicely done... John

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
    Thank you, John. So glad you found it funny. I wanted it to bring laughter. You just made my day. Smile
Comment from Angel Blessings
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OMG! I love the picture! Your poem followed the rules exactly, and made me smile! Your words have a vivid imagery to them as well! Good luck! Angel Blessings

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
    Thank you, Angel Blessings.
Comment from l.raven
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This is as precious as it can get...the little guy wants to sow his own oats...I love your poem...wording perfect...and a so sweet picture...love pictures..very well written

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
    Thank you very much.
reply by l.raven on 15-Mar-2014
    you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from Petriesan
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good luck int he contest

The two year old got mad and wanted to run away from home, but had to ask mom to help him zip his jacket and tie his shoes.

like the cub in the picture

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    LOL thank you.
Comment from 1954speed
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I like the overall message. A child wanting its independence but not so far away from safety as to be in danger. And the look of the parents and petulant child fits the message to a t! nice work

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Kingsland
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That's a cute picture and a great caption for it. This just tickled my funny bone. I found it very amusing and very creative. I just love the way the big cats are looking at the little one... john

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thank you, John. I'm glad it tickled you.
Comment from Millibrad
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This is cute and funny. What a prize of a picture and your 5-7-5 poem captions it perfectly. Thanks for posting and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thank you, Millibrad.
Comment from Karen B.
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Awwww...I love the poem and the picture. That little one looks about ferocious enough to catch a mouse, maybe. :) Good luck in the contest!

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 Comment Written 14-Mar-2014

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2014
    Thank you, Karen.