The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 125 "5-7-5 Good Imagination"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
17 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sadly, that big roar comes out as a small meow. What do I know, maybe to the kitty the little meow sounds big. Great job with this :)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
Sadly, that big roar comes out as a small meow. What do I know, maybe to the kitty the little meow sounds big. Great job with this :)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks for such a wonderful review and rating. :-)
Comment from Leineco
Imagination
Little Kitten climbs a tree
Mountain-lion roars
That is the best, most adorable definition of imagination I have ever seen!
Bravo!! Applause!!! Well Done!!!! :-)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
Imagination
Little Kitten climbs a tree
Mountain-lion roars
That is the best, most adorable definition of imagination I have ever seen!
Bravo!! Applause!!! Well Done!!!! :-)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you Leineco for this great review. I am delighted you enjoyed it :-)
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Oh we love the picture. Sometimes our imagination gets us in real trouble and does cause us to fear things we don't need to. God loves you and so do we.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
Oh we love the picture. Sometimes our imagination gets us in real trouble and does cause us to fear things we don't need to. God loves you and so do we.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you Ms Evelyn, for this great review. I hope you are feeling much better.
Comment from starkat
Roaring mountain lion would cause any little kitten to scamper up a tree ... me, too. Both are part and parcel to the cat family, so they understand each other, though a little 'meow' couldn't be heard over that mountain lion's roar. Kitten is a scardy-cat for now, but imagines someday its meow will grow into a roar. Lots of imagination happening ... all in fun.
Enjoyed your 'Just for Fun'. Well done ... ;o)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
Roaring mountain lion would cause any little kitten to scamper up a tree ... me, too. Both are part and parcel to the cat family, so they understand each other, though a little 'meow' couldn't be heard over that mountain lion's roar. Kitten is a scardy-cat for now, but imagines someday its meow will grow into a roar. Lots of imagination happening ... all in fun.
Enjoyed your 'Just for Fun'. Well done ... ;o)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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What a fun review, thank you for your time and comments. :-)
Comment from babylonia
You definitely added a great picture. Made me smile ... your words as well as the pic.
Help me down. Feed me, please.
Good luck~
Love,
Barbara
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
You definitely added a great picture. Made me smile ... your words as well as the pic.
Help me down. Feed me, please.
Good luck~
Love,
Barbara
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks Barbara for the great review of this one, I am delighted it made you smile. :-)
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you are welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from lakeport
good imagination, that's a lovely picture, indeed sometimes the kitties cant get down. that's a lovely 5/7/5 poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
good imagination, that's a lovely picture, indeed sometimes the kitties cant get down. that's a lovely 5/7/5 poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks for the great review, hugs back to you, :-)
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the kitten. He looks like he thought he was a mountain lion until he got to the branch. Now, he does not seem too sure. I think he just wants Mama now. The little ones can get themselves into some messes. Fun read.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
I love the kitten. He looks like he thought he was a mountain lion until he got to the branch. Now, he does not seem too sure. I think he just wants Mama now. The little ones can get themselves into some messes. Fun read.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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I appreciate your wonderful comments, kittens are fun, :-)
Comment from adewpearl
what an adorable photo that complements so well your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 format
good alliteration in kitten climbs
and what a great visual of this cute kitten imagining itself to be a roaring lion :-) wonderful commentary on the power of imagination Brooke
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
what an adorable photo that complements so well your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 format
good alliteration in kitten climbs
and what a great visual of this cute kitten imagining itself to be a roaring lion :-) wonderful commentary on the power of imagination Brooke
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks Brooke, I appreciate your complimentary review :-)
Comment from Dean Kuch
M-E-O-O-W-W!... Hah ha!
This was gr-r-r-r-r-r-e-a-t! It should do very well in this contest, too. I wish you the best of luck...
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
M-E-O-O-W-W!... Hah ha!
This was gr-r-r-r-r-r-e-a-t! It should do very well in this contest, too. I wish you the best of luck...
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Meooww back to you Dean...... Thanks for the great review and well wishes :-)
Comment from michaelcahill
much more than a silly little laugh. a well written piece that captures the personality of a cat to perfection. (will let someone else say purrfection) quite clever and I am smiling. mike
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
much more than a silly little laugh. a well written piece that captures the personality of a cat to perfection. (will let someone else say purrfection) quite clever and I am smiling. mike
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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I am glad I made you smile Mike. Thanks for the purrrfect comments. :-)