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The Silent Fool

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Comment from MidnightWriter4U
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"I prefer to keep them guessing."
A writer after my own heart. LOL! In my humble opinion (note the subtle jump over the legal hurdle) there exist many who would do better to just shut the large hole in their face and keep their opinions to themselves. But, you didn't hear that from me; and I will deny ever typing it.

Enjoyed!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2013
    Subtlety in our reaction to sheer stupidity is a lot more calming. Thanks.
reply by MidnightWriter4U on 07-Jul-2013
    You are welcome. Poker faced. MN :)
Comment from Garry Souders
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You have said a mouth full here, and I catch what you are saying and in my own way agree with you. One person that irritates me but I say nothing is the person who is proud that they always tell the truth. They call a hear a heart, they tell the ugly that they are ugly they tell the fat that they should quit eating, they get on my nerves. By stating the obvious they have wasted my time and hurt other peoples feeling. Nice essay you have written And I enjoyed a lot.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    That person sure sounds a lot like my mother. They take pride in their stones.
Comment from christianpowers
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Hi,

I enjoyed your little essay here, but I think the quote ends with "...than to open your mouth and remove all doubt."

Also, this sentence is flawed.. >>> Hate mongering laws are meant to protect against radicals who expose violence as a means of converting or subverting those that disagree. <<< I think you mean 'espouse' not 'expose', and you should use 'those WHO disagree' not 'those that disagree'.

The sentiment on choosing silence is a good one though. Great job. Good luck in the contest.

Christian

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    I was struggling with the wording of that quote...thanks. Also right on other points. greatly appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
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I think your essay speaks well for your personal stand on people's opinions. Third paragraph, third sentence, you need a 't' to change 'mean' to 'meant'. I also think you wanted to use the word 'espouse' in that sentence. It now says 'expose', which I question. Happy days!

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    Appreciate the keen eye. Thanks.
Comment from Brocha1
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a thought provoking piece.
You have eloquently expressed boththe harm which comes from our words both in the public political sphere and also in private. Your conclusions to keep your thoughts to yourself are well understood.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    Thank you. Not all thoughts are meant to be hidden, but rambling idea an=re often just filler.
Comment from Ekim777
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Voltaire once said; "I don't agree with a word you say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it." this said; beware of he says; "Now this is a fact! Generally he is confusing facts which are generally only provisional facts, with opinions; open to interpretation. Your next issue is more significant. What is it that gets hurt. It is surely only your ego and your pride. To recognize is to gain a peculiar freedom. And to gain this freedom is to turn the other cheek. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    What a great response. You made me smile.
Comment from The Death
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i agree with what you have said.people do mistake silence for foolishness and they don,t have the broader vision to look at things and interpret them doing full justice.the just wanna be heard and gain popularity and its so sick.just can't be tolerated.just a typo

"Mt mother once told me, "Words are like arrows. When you release them you'll never know how far they will go and what they will strike."
it should be 'My'.you did a wonderful task writing this

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    Thanks for the typo alert.

    Yes, some people definitely like the sound of their own voice.
Comment from Righteous Riter
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The writer delivers a message that is filled with wisdom and knowledge. I like the angle the writer takes this message. I agree with you 100% on this one. This story makes me giggle a little. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    Well, if you're silent and giggle, it will drive people crazy.