Fragile Beauty
Designed Butterfly Shape poem22 total reviews
Comment from poetbear
Have to try the genre.
I love butterflies.
Very fond of blue ones.
Beautifully crafted and written.
Just lovely,well done.
Reads and flows well.
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Have to try the genre.
I love butterflies.
Very fond of blue ones.
Beautifully crafted and written.
Just lovely,well done.
Reads and flows well.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2016
Comment from dragonpoet
Once you realize you read it down each side instead of across, it is a wonderful ode to the beauty and grace of the butterly. You did a good job in forming the butterfly with words and symbols.
Maybe you should put in the notes how you should read it.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Once you realize you read it down each side instead of across, it is a wonderful ode to the beauty and grace of the butterly. You did a good job in forming the butterfly with words and symbols.
Maybe you should put in the notes how you should read it.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 22-May-2015
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem--the words and the shape of the butterfly alone. The words are very descriptive and suit the beauty of the butterfly perfectly. Congrats on the award. I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
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I enjoyed your poem--the words and the shape of the butterfly alone. The words are very descriptive and suit the beauty of the butterfly perfectly. Congrats on the award. I see no changes. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
Comment from magalbagal
i love the form it adds the perfect affect. the shape of a butterfly ties together the whole poem. your description was outstanding and the rhyming was perfect. good job
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i love the form it adds the perfect affect. the shape of a butterfly ties together the whole poem. your description was outstanding and the rhyming was perfect. good job
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
Comment from jojo1127
I find these type of poems very creative, in shape and imagery. This poem flows very nicely describing the beauty and characteristic of the butterfly.
I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
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I find these type of poems very creative, in shape and imagery. This poem flows very nicely describing the beauty and characteristic of the butterfly.
I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2012
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha from Hawaii Helvi2, What a delightful poem with the added elegance in the shape of a butterfly. How great it is. You do radiate creativity so well. I love butterflies. Thank you for sharing. Aloha Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
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Aloha from Hawaii Helvi2, What a delightful poem with the added elegance in the shape of a butterfly. How great it is. You do radiate creativity so well. I love butterflies. Thank you for sharing. Aloha Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 01-Sep-2012
Comment from Solacium Mariae
Holy, well, amazing!
Fantastic poem (this one was much easier to read than the one of yours I'd read a whole while back). Straight down each side; that's pretty simple. I could handle that.
The poem is written beautifully, the language I mean.
The butterfly, well, it's incredible.
How did you do it in the editor? Did you use a table, or no?
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Holy, well, amazing!
Fantastic poem (this one was much easier to read than the one of yours I'd read a whole while back). Straight down each side; that's pretty simple. I could handle that.
The poem is written beautifully, the language I mean.
The butterfly, well, it's incredible.
How did you do it in the editor? Did you use a table, or no?
Comment Written 24-Jul-2012
Comment from Fandoodle
nice touch with the design of the words into wings. The poem has a delightful rhyme that slips off the tongue. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
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nice touch with the design of the words into wings. The poem has a delightful rhyme that slips off the tongue. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
Comment from Eleanor Buron
This is a lovely shaped poem. The symbolism of the butterfly lends itself beautifully here. The poem allows for one to think of the butterfly in flight so there's another motion going on along with the rhythm of the poem.
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This is a lovely shaped poem. The symbolism of the butterfly lends itself beautifully here. The poem allows for one to think of the butterfly in flight so there's another motion going on along with the rhythm of the poem.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2012
Comment from ennahanid
I wish I had a 6 left, but I don't - you are so creative and must have an awful lot of patience to do these shape pieces. A standing ovation on this, amazing...love it - Dinah
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I wish I had a 6 left, but I don't - you are so creative and must have an awful lot of patience to do these shape pieces. A standing ovation on this, amazing...love it - Dinah
Comment Written 19-Jul-2012