Call Me When You Get There
a song to my father25 total reviews
Comment from Angel Debbie
I hope this reaches the all time best, I think its wonderful and to be put in a song terriffic! May all your dreams come true one day when Dad can actually hear his song being sung out loud. Take Care.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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I hope this reaches the all time best, I think its wonderful and to be put in a song terriffic! May all your dreams come true one day when Dad can actually hear his song being sung out loud. Take Care.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much for your kind words. It was very healing when I put this down. I think my dad would have liked it too. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
That was so beautiful. You did a great job of telling this fine story, in a song. It was very good how it turned around at the end, to now be her turn....Loved this so much, I wish I had a six, but please accept this five, knowing it was worthy of a six! LOL
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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That was so beautiful. You did a great job of telling this fine story, in a song. It was very good how it turned around at the end, to now be her turn....Loved this so much, I wish I had a six, but please accept this five, knowing it was worthy of a six! LOL
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from bayoupoet
This is a beautiful song, well written with vivid imagery. It carries through a lifetime of Father's worry and the twist at the end. It is both sweet and bittersweet. It is a pleasure to read for you! Blessings!
sandra
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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This is a beautiful song, well written with vivid imagery. It carries through a lifetime of Father's worry and the twist at the end. It is both sweet and bittersweet. It is a pleasure to read for you! Blessings!
sandra
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Sandra, thank you so much. Everything came full circle for me when my father got sick. I appreciate your comments.
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You are truly welcome!
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
oh yes, i liked this, Katie.
what a lovely rememberance song.
have you the music worked for it?
it would be good to hear.
many thanks for sharing.
warmly, eph.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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oh yes, i liked this, Katie.
what a lovely rememberance song.
have you the music worked for it?
it would be good to hear.
many thanks for sharing.
warmly, eph.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Yes, the music came very easy for me on this one. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from poetparman
A truly heart warming poem. I like Pre Chorus 2 when the tense shifts to daughter after her father dies. "She says call me when you get there." Great Story poem with lots of feeling. Thanks for sharing your inspiration. My sympathy on the loss of your father.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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A truly heart warming poem. I like Pre Chorus 2 when the tense shifts to daughter after her father dies. "She says call me when you get there." Great Story poem with lots of feeling. Thanks for sharing your inspiration. My sympathy on the loss of your father.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind read and review. It was so healing to write this and see life come full circle. My father spent years worried about me and here I was wishing I knew he got to heaven okay.
Comment from jadapenn
This is so special. Indeed a terrific song for your father. I'm sure he's smiling down at you. I loved the caring words. They reach out and touch the heart. Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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This is so special. Indeed a terrific song for your father. I'm sure he's smiling down at you. I loved the caring words. They reach out and touch the heart. Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind words. My Father was very special and I appreciate your time reading this.
Comment from Carolyn 12
Honey I am so sorry for your loss. Your song is beautiful. Would love to hear it sung. Thank you so much for sharing such a private time.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Honey I am so sorry for your loss. Your song is beautiful. Would love to hear it sung. Thank you so much for sharing such a private time.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Thank you. This was so healing. God might have given me the ability to write for the sole purpose of getting me through this. I appreciate you kind words.
Comment from HPicasso
Very touching poem for me. I have tears in my eyes.
The lyrics are simple but very truly it touches your heart and you can clearly see the father waiting for the call from his lovely daughter.
Grat Job! I am sorry about the loss of your father.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Very touching poem for me. I have tears in my eyes.
The lyrics are simple but very truly it touches your heart and you can clearly see the father waiting for the call from his lovely daughter.
Grat Job! I am sorry about the loss of your father.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind words. Im am so glad that the feeling came across.
Comment from Betty517
I love this Katie, I could hear the music as I read the poem. Your words flow so easily and you can definitely put this to music. Very beautifully done. Call Me When You Get There, is now singing through my head I love that line.
Betty
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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I love this Katie, I could hear the music as I read the poem. Your words flow so easily and you can definitely put this to music. Very beautifully done. Call Me When You Get There, is now singing through my head I love that line.
Betty
Comment Written 06-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Thank you. This one was one of the easiest to put to music. I am so glad you liked it.
Comment from oNray
Wow- what a heart grabber!! This was well thought out and delivered well. But the content- what a content- your words are so true to form, I can see this , I can feel this , what a terrific poem>:)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Wow- what a heart grabber!! This was well thought out and delivered well. But the content- what a content- your words are so true to form, I can see this , I can feel this , what a terrific poem>:)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2011
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Thank you. I am so glad the emotion came across.