Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Chapter 15; part one"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from knowledge
I'm back, been really busy tutoring children. You are writing professionally now. Great job. You have a good grasp of telling your story without bogging your reader down.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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I'm back, been really busy tutoring children. You are writing professionally now. Great job. You have a good grasp of telling your story without bogging your reader down.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 03-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from forestport12
First. I do believe in prayer, not that I'm special, The potter turned the wheel on my creation like everyone. So I will pray for your speedy recovery. I think it is amazing that you can be under such stress, yet write with a clarity and simplicity that must be part of your trademark. Even in the places where it should feel mundane for this part, you know how to keep moving with smart verb choices, etc... Stan
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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First. I do believe in prayer, not that I'm special, The potter turned the wheel on my creation like everyone. So I will pray for your speedy recovery. I think it is amazing that you can be under such stress, yet write with a clarity and simplicity that must be part of your trademark. Even in the places where it should feel mundane for this part, you know how to keep moving with smart verb choices, etc... Stan
Comment Written 03-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your wisdom on prayer. I am too a strong prayer warrior. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from essence56
Okay, I am going bullistic here. Thank you so much for finally bringing these two together. I just know in my heart she is going to say yes. This is an awesome story and I can't wait for it's ending. Loving it and you. I am happy things are going well for you. Thank God for his blessings. Very good work.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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Okay, I am going bullistic here. Thank you so much for finally bringing these two together. I just know in my heart she is going to say yes. This is an awesome story and I can't wait for it's ending. Loving it and you. I am happy things are going well for you. Thank God for his blessings. Very good work.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Caeric il produttore
Always hard to jump into a story in the middle, or in this case near the end. However, this chapter holds up nicely and is very well written. I'm interested to see how this concludes. Thanks for sharing.
Il Produttore - My $.02
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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Always hard to jump into a story in the middle, or in this case near the end. However, this chapter holds up nicely and is very well written. I'm interested to see how this concludes. Thanks for sharing.
Il Produttore - My $.02
Comment Written 02-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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Yes, there are only 11 pages pages left of a 370 page novel. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from lepton37
First and most importantly - hang in with the chemo: we're all with you (even the ones just making your aquaintance!). I've helped 2 friends through it - I've seen the brutal toll. God bless this community for being here for you.
It looks like I'm catching the "tale"end LOL- but with writing of this quality, the chapters often work as stand-alones. Of course, being a sarah with an H, I wish Sara had one too!
The characters are genuine and likeable, except stupid Ginger Moore!
Thank you for an entertaining read and best of luck with your health. - sarah!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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First and most importantly - hang in with the chemo: we're all with you (even the ones just making your aquaintance!). I've helped 2 friends through it - I've seen the brutal toll. God bless this community for being here for you.
It looks like I'm catching the "tale"end LOL- but with writing of this quality, the chapters often work as stand-alones. Of course, being a sarah with an H, I wish Sara had one too!
The characters are genuine and likeable, except stupid Ginger Moore!
Thank you for an entertaining read and best of luck with your health. - sarah!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from markk
a beautiful and romantic part of this story which is coming to a beautiful conclusion. Its all so "fairytale". What a wonderful story and of course Sara deserves everything. well written.
And, I wish you the best with continuing with your Chemo. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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a beautiful and romantic part of this story which is coming to a beautiful conclusion. Its all so "fairytale". What a wonderful story and of course Sara deserves everything. well written.
And, I wish you the best with continuing with your Chemo. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from JW
Dang it. Dang it. Dang it. We were left not knowing what is about to happen. And I don't know why, but I somehow suspect an totally unexpected twist is on its way.
Great job. - And my prayers are with you regarding what you are going though.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2011
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Dang it. Dang it. Dang it. We were left not knowing what is about to happen. And I don't know why, but I somehow suspect an totally unexpected twist is on its way.
Great job. - And my prayers are with you regarding what you are going though.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2011
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There is a tiny twist that is going to happen. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Whoa! What a surprise for Sara! Don't know if I would like the unannounced wedding myself, but as long as both parties agree...although she still hasn't said 'yes' ;p
Good job!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2011
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Whoa! What a surprise for Sara! Don't know if I would like the unannounced wedding myself, but as long as both parties agree...although she still hasn't said 'yes' ;p
Good job!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2011
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Sara isn't happy with all the control Joe has taken over. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
I loved this chapter. It's fun and also very special. Poor Joe is still waiting for an answer from this lady. He must love her very much. lol.
Well written. luv jada
PS: Proud of you that you're doing so well with your treatment.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2011
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I loved this chapter. It's fun and also very special. Poor Joe is still waiting for an answer from this lady. He must love her very much. lol.
Well written. luv jada
PS: Proud of you that you're doing so well with your treatment.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2011
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Thank you girlfriend, for your review and kindness.
Comment from marcii
As much as someone loves another I doubt a woman would like everything done for her, some things yeah would be nice but the dress, no way.
Any how it's a nice story though.
Marcii
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2011
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As much as someone loves another I doubt a woman would like everything done for her, some things yeah would be nice but the dress, no way.
Any how it's a nice story though.
Marcii
Comment Written 01-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2011
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I agree and I think Sara will say something very soon. Thank you for your kind reveiw.