Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Chapter 11; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from Nicnac
OMG!
A live rape? Oh how horrible. What horrible images must be running through Sara's mind. Poor woman.
The closing scene between Sara and Joe is so touching. Sara is seeing more and more of who Joe is, and he is an irresistible man. ;)
Loving the story... going to read more now...
No suggestions. :)
Nic
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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OMG!
A live rape? Oh how horrible. What horrible images must be running through Sara's mind. Poor woman.
The closing scene between Sara and Joe is so touching. Sara is seeing more and more of who Joe is, and he is an irresistible man. ;)
Loving the story... going to read more now...
No suggestions. :)
Nic
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your review, I am glad you are back.
Comment from marcii
I thought this chapter was a great improvement on the last one and had me once again wanting to read more.
The situation would be really difficult to deal with.
Marcii
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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I thought this chapter was a great improvement on the last one and had me once again wanting to read more.
The situation would be really difficult to deal with.
Marcii
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from The Wood Work
This is a great and interesting story. I can see why you have received a "All Time Best" on it. Captures interest right away and leaves you wanting to read more. What every story teller wants, right? Good luck to you!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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This is a great and interesting story. I can see why you have received a "All Time Best" on it. Captures interest right away and leaves you wanting to read more. What every story teller wants, right? Good luck to you!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from patmedium
Very well written, Barbara. Clearly paints the stress, distress and fear as well as the anger and frustration.
As for 'Thanksgiving' we don't over here. xxx
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Very well written, Barbara. Clearly paints the stress, distress and fear as well as the anger and frustration.
As for 'Thanksgiving' we don't over here. xxx
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I hope you are keeping warm. I heard England was cold, right now.
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It's well sub-zero, and as usual, everyone's trying to find a Patsy to blame ... just posted one on that! LOL. xxx
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I was working on my November 29 ths posts. I am way behind again, and am going to bed now. I am going to bed earlier than you and it's way later where you're at.
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You may be going to bed way earlier than me at the moment, but I am not on Chemo.
I have just heard that my youngest is going to make me a grandma in June. My first. xxx
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GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good chapter you have penned my friend. I pray that your chemo will go well. You used very good descriptive wording. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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This is a very good chapter you have penned my friend. I pray that your chemo will go well. You used very good descriptive wording. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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hugs, Teri
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is another great chapter full of emotion. I could feel the tension all the way through on this one. It's horrific to think there are really gangs out there involved in this virgin rape thing
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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This is another great chapter full of emotion. I could feel the tension all the way through on this one. It's horrific to think there are really gangs out there involved in this virgin rape thing
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from eliz100
This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual. Their feelings about Cassie and each other came through loud and clear.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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This was a great read from beginning to end, as usual. Their feelings about Cassie and each other came through loud and clear.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good read with imagery and excitement. I was in there with the characters, Avery good read indead.Full of imagery and good descriptive in the script . Thanks for sharing with me.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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A good read with imagery and excitement. I was in there with the characters, Avery good read indead.Full of imagery and good descriptive in the script . Thanks for sharing with me.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from animatqua
The tension in this chapter is palpable. The two conflict lines are dovetailing well, and keep the reader's anxiety flipping back and forth between concerns--nice technique!
I did find one spag:
want to lose you. Joe (needs a quotation mark after you.)
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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The tension in this chapter is palpable. The two conflict lines are dovetailing well, and keep the reader's anxiety flipping back and forth between concerns--nice technique!
I did find one spag:
want to lose you. Joe (needs a quotation mark after you.)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Magic Wand
The raw emotions are palpable. Your writing style is gripping. This is a nightmare, no parent wants to endure.
I hope Cassie is found safe, and you are feeling well.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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The raw emotions are palpable. Your writing style is gripping. This is a nightmare, no parent wants to endure.
I hope Cassie is found safe, and you are feeling well.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you for kind review.