Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Chapter 30 Wiling Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice resolution: "John, Sami's dad, walked to the head of a long table. "Noah, I'm glad you could make it. Let's all welcome Noah. I have suspicion he's going to be a permanent fixture at our table. It warms my heart that our family keeps growing." He took a sip of water. "Everybody, take your seats." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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Nice resolution: "John, Sami's dad, walked to the head of a long table. "Noah, I'm glad you could make it. Let's all welcome Noah. I have suspicion he's going to be a permanent fixture at our table. It warms my heart that our family keeps growing." He took a sip of water. "Everybody, take your seats." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from Wendy G
Things seem to be progressing smoothly, and it's good that her family accept him so readily, and also that he is interested in attending church, which I think would be quite important for Sami Well done, sounds like the conclusion is next (a weddding?).
Wendy
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Things seem to be progressing smoothly, and it's good that her family accept him so readily, and also that he is interested in attending church, which I think would be quite important for Sami Well done, sounds like the conclusion is next (a weddding?).
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from nomi338
I really love these characters, I love their relationship, their motivations. I love just about everything about them. Having to rely on my memories of the relationship I had with my wife, it gets quite a bit lonely at time, especially times when we would share conversations about friends, our kids, and their kids. Just things in general. Thank you for this wonderful story and these great characters.
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I really love these characters, I love their relationship, their motivations. I love just about everything about them. Having to rely on my memories of the relationship I had with my wife, it gets quite a bit lonely at time, especially times when we would share conversations about friends, our kids, and their kids. Just things in general. Thank you for this wonderful story and these great characters.
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from Sankey
You continue to amaze me with all your angles. Still a great read and guess what? NO SPAGS this time around. Make sure I get notified I don't know how I missed the last chapter.
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You continue to amaze me with all your angles. Still a great read and guess what? NO SPAGS this time around. Make sure I get notified I don't know how I missed the last chapter.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from jim vecchio
I'm glad I returned from the hospital in time for two more chapters. After the next one, I'll be itching for more from you. Glad you're already prepared. I hardly know what I'll post from day to day.
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I'm glad I returned from the hospital in time for two more chapters. After the next one, I'll be itching for more from you. Glad you're already prepared. I hardly know what I'll post from day to day.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed this story very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud and I also enjoyed the media of Noah. He seems like a really nice guy in the story and he seems like he would make a terrific uncle for the little boy. Your story flows very well and your sentence and structure and paragraphing are very well done. Patricia.
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I enjoyed this story very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud and I also enjoyed the media of Noah. He seems like a really nice guy in the story and he seems like he would make a terrific uncle for the little boy. Your story flows very well and your sentence and structure and paragraphing are very well done. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from Paul McFarland
It's nice to have a chapter without problems. It looks like you are tying things up very nicely. Looking forward to the wedding. They will make a great couple.
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It's nice to have a chapter without problems. It looks like you are tying things up very nicely. Looking forward to the wedding. They will make a great couple.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from judiverse
It seems that Noah has made a new friend in toddler Greg. That was a cute scene. I don't know why Noah would need to take time off to baby sit. It's a job Sami could handle on her own. Has she plans for going back to work? Church scene handled beautifully. Take a look at his sentence: Sami kissed her mom and dad's cheeks, who moved over to make room. Well, I suppose their cheeks would have had to move over, but clarify the thought. It would simplify if you said kissed her mom and dad. Congratulations on coming to the end of this one, and it's impressive you have a new one coming up. judi
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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It seems that Noah has made a new friend in toddler Greg. That was a cute scene. I don't know why Noah would need to take time off to baby sit. It's a job Sami could handle on her own. Has she plans for going back to work? Church scene handled beautifully. Take a look at his sentence: Sami kissed her mom and dad's cheeks, who moved over to make room. Well, I suppose their cheeks would have had to move over, but clarify the thought. It would simplify if you said kissed her mom and dad. Congratulations on coming to the end of this one, and it's impressive you have a new one coming up. judi
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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I wondered about that sentence. I changed it at the last second and still didn't get it write. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome. I always goof when I try to revise something. Judi
Comment from eliz100
As usual, your writing is interesting. It kept me interested from the beginning. The picture fits the story. You moved the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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As usual, your writing is interesting. It kept me interested from the beginning. The picture fits the story. You moved the story along nicely. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
A nice family filled chapter with plenty of displays of affection, declaration of love and additions to an ever-growing family. You touched on some worries, gave some assurances and we see how life moving forward could be like. Well written.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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A nice family filled chapter with plenty of displays of affection, declaration of love and additions to an ever-growing family. You touched on some worries, gave some assurances and we see how life moving forward could be like. Well written.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Only one chapter to go. Thank you for the kind review.
