Peace to the world
A plea for cessation of hostilities in 20252 total reviews
Comment from Patricia Cammish
This is a very successful interpretation of the 1-6-1 syllable poem format with a worthwhile message clearly expressed.
My only comment is one of presentation. Your picture is beautiful and appropriate but is not complemented by the dark solid text, almost brutalist in style.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This is a very successful interpretation of the 1-6-1 syllable poem format with a worthwhile message clearly expressed.
My only comment is one of presentation. Your picture is beautiful and appropriate but is not complemented by the dark solid text, almost brutalist in style.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Patricia.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your poem is short yet so powerful! "Dove" followed by "sent from Heaven above" gives it a peaceful feeling. And the word "Love" at the end ties everything together so beautifully. It feels like a sweet message. Almost like a quiet blessing. Very beautiful.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I love how your poem is short yet so powerful! "Dove" followed by "sent from Heaven above" gives it a peaceful feeling. And the word "Love" at the end ties everything together so beautifully. It feels like a sweet message. Almost like a quiet blessing. Very beautiful.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Michael.
